Danielle's Revenge

well, I just disagree.......

Your story is pretty well written.
Yes, there are several perceptual errors and some issues with grammar and spelling (yup, you could use a little editorial help!).
But as far as it goes, it's a pretty good snapshot of a horrific situation.

I DO agree that it begs for a chapter two. Perhaps FTDS will find some motivation to write something, since you seem to have dropped out.

Several questions beg answers.....
Does he ever get out of his enforced confinement?
If so, does he exact some revenge or at least get away from her?
The story as we have it, suggests she is walking out of his life with Ramone.
So, does she come back to taunt and torture him or does he work his way out or does someone else come by and rescue him? What does he do next? Call the cops?
It,is illegal to drug someone and confine them against their will. He was certainly not willing, so with an eye witness (or a suitably compelled Ramone) he'd have a pretty good case against his now slut wife. Also, annulments are far easier to get so early in a marriage than divorces, and baby, he's got cause.

Ah, well. Perhaps we'll never know, will we?

A wannabe cuckold names "DamonX"...

...all his stories are similar. Guy with no self-respect and no balls..it seems to be true that you mostly write what you miss out..

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Where is the end?

Does she come back? Does she leave him and run off with Ramone? Does he get loose and leave her? Divorce her? Like too many of your stories this one is unfinished and therefore deserves and gets a "1".

Thanks for the effort.

Means nothing without hubby's story

Just a slut wife store. Lots of them here.

I THINK THEY BOTH ARE FORGETTING

about the two-edged sword. TK U MLJ LV NV

A Bad Poem

This story is like a poorly written Haiku that is missing a line.

So many unfinished stories by this author

He should change his name to "Unfinished". In this one the wife goes ballistic over her husband having sex with another woman BEFORE they were engaged/married. How stupid can she be? And of course she decides to get even by fucking another man right in his face after committing several crimes by tying her husband up. And after the fucking she leaves him on the floor. The end? THE END? Geez what a complete waste of time. Hubby gets loose and either packs all the things he wants, stops by the bank, cleans out the accounts and safety deposit box, cancels the credit cards and moves across the country never speaking to her again OR you can read FTDS convoluted ending to this where he nearly kills her and then reconciles with her. I truly horrible ending by my take.

So this is just a jerk off story. Okay.

I apologize

I was totally wrong in my last comment.

This isn't a jerk off STORY. It's a jerk off SCENE. Long enough to get a guy to come and that's about it if humiliation turns you on.

Yuck

Enough said. Should be - 1 but gets a 1*

Actually...

...this is no jerk-off story nor a jerk-off scene - it is a jerk, trying (as usual and as published on other websites) to demonstrate is own incompetence to the world. He has never been ab le to finish off (both story and women). Poor whatever-he-may-consider-himself.

really just a 2

This I know this is suppose to be fiction but, it was just too fucking stupid.

Okay.

Did he cheat before they met, after they met, once they were exclusive, once engaged, or after they were married? When she crawled close, could he have head-butted her?
On to FTDS's conclusion! Does she expect hubby to accept this?

Goodbye,CUNT!

Plan a special counter revenge whereby a xxxvideo of the slut getting gangbanged by 3 heavy hung black dudes is e-mailed to everyone she knows:mom,dad,friends,enemies,boss,co-workers, and sleazy on-line sites who you know will post it. The use it as evidence as you DIVORCE her sorry ass!!!

This was simply ridiculous!

I swear I think some of these stories are written by twelve year olds. But then in this case that's insulting the twelve year old.

Geez do you EVER finish a story?

This started out good and then came the non-ending. Just like driving a truck off a cliff. UGH!

o my wife is to good to me for that

If i was him i would leave the state and have people pore acid in both there eyes.amen.

1*

sooooooooo old!

Ugh!

The stupid "revenge" was bad enough, but for him to be such a cuck as to get hard watching her?!

Skimmed

Getting ready to re-read FTDS's finish.

"It was a mistake. I'm sorry." – Why is he sorry? They weren’t even engaged!
Assuming they were dating, the appropriate punishment is breaking up. If she’s only finding out about it now, the “punishment” would maybe be a nice dinner out, or some clothes or jewelry, maybe no sex except for oral sex on her for a weekend, but not this!

She can’t force him to watch, he can just close his eyes!