All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 00'

OMG I'm reading along there, getting all hot and bothered with what's about to happen... and there isn't another page to click on! You wicked, wicked thing, you! LOL. Okay seriously, this is going to be something cool I can tell, and I can't wait!

Love all your stories and you have provided a great start on this one too. Yum, feisty. Wish there was more.

I am very, very interested! I like that the human stands up to the vampire

Seriously... one page?? You are such a tease! I've really enjoyed your other stories and see that since you've started at Lit, you post pretty regularly so I'm going to keep my fingers crossed that Chapter 1 will follow very soon! Can't wait!

BTW, congrats on the little green E yesterday for your story SPECIAL :-)

Short but great start, I shall be waiting for more.

First I have to say THANK YOU to all the wonderful people who have left comments. How exciting is THAT!!

I think I may have confused some people with this thought... not surprising as I am a bit confused myself... nothing different there either. I posted this as a prologue. I have chapter one with whoever it is that approves (or not :P ). I am thinking that becuase it takes a couple of days for a chapter to be approved that I will post a new one when the last one is approved so there should be a new one up every couple of days.

This is and isn't a vampire story. Luma certainly isn't a traditional vampire. In fact he might not be a vampire at all. If you're looking for Twilight forget it. If you're looking for an adventure stick with it ;)

Thanks again :)

I'll monitor this story I can't wait for more!

Nice opening chapter.It's well written and intriguing.Looking forward to more,

for f--ks sake.? this should be in the section under vampires......took me while to twig.?

lost me . but will give it another go.

Nice opening - I hope this doesn't end up being cruel - cruelty I don't like.