Every Year

Awesome

Awesome.....i hope you continue writing i am hooked for sure

please continue, i would like to know what her problem is

A solid first effort

For a first time writer, this was an excellent start. There were a few technical errors that could be eliminated with the help of an editor, but overall it was very well done. You have to continue; it would be a sin to leave the story unresolved. I look forward to the next installment.

*****

Good, but could use an editor.

Five.

Not bad for your 1st story

This is good for your 1st story. Please continue because I would like to know if she meets Rick again or what it is that's controlling her to go to these biker bars.

continue

Very interested

So come on with the next chapter :-D

Wow

I really enjoyed the first part. I can't wait for the next installment.

i could see this happening

Ill give this a four only because I can't give it a 4 and a half. Would love to know the story further.

I love it..please continue

More

I'd like to know the reasons that she does this annually. Please continue.

Great Start

I would like to find out why Mandy only does this once a Year.
it seems she has a need she suppresses until it gets to be too much.or shes Haunted.

awesome

I love it u should go on and make it a series!

Hottt

This was blazing!!!!!

Love bikers

More please

I like it.....

please continue.

So far so good

Please continue the story, I want to know what happens next.

Interesting

I hope you finish the story I really want to know what is going on with her.

Cinco Estrellas!

I gave it Five Stars but I agree with IzzyLove. I hope you will finish it.