All Comments on 'Every Year'

Awesome.....i hope you continue writing i am hooked for sure

please continue, i would like to know what her problem is

For a first time writer, this was an excellent start. There were a few technical errors that could be eliminated with the help of an editor, but overall it was very well done. You have to continue; it would be a sin to leave the story unresolved. I look forward to the next installment.

Good, but could use an editor.

Five.

This is good for your 1st story. Please continue because I would like to know if she meets Rick again or what it is that's controlling her to go to these biker bars.

continue

So come on with the next chapter :-D

I really enjoyed the first part. I can't wait for the next installment.

Ill give this a four only because I can't give it a 4 and a half. Would love to know the story further.

I love it..please continue

I'd like to know the reasons that she does this annually. Please continue.

I would like to find out why Mandy only does this once a Year.

it seems she has a need she suppresses until it gets to be too much.or shes Haunted.

I love it u should go on and make it a series!

This was blazing!!!!!

More please

please continue.

Please continue the story, I want to know what happens next.

I hope you finish the story I really want to know what is going on with her.

I gave it Five Stars but I agree with IzzyLove. I hope you will finish it.