by GypsyGirl84
It was a very nice followup to the first chapter, but I thought it was a little short. I'm glad that you held off on actual sex between the two, as it wouldn't have been all that appropriate. However, if she was going to do anything else with him, I'd like to have seen all that resolved and end the chapter with them going to sleep, so that chapter 3 (assuming there will be one) would start with the next morning.
It's not incest so what is the problem ? This is a delight to read so keep the story going.
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Ch. 2 of Dancing With Kelly ended abruptly, as if you (the author) had to go to a meeting and never came back to end the chapter. I know it has been a long time, but please consider finishing the story.
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