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Posessions Ch. 01

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by Anonymous12/29/11

Very good start

I thought it was hot. Not long enough but set the stage for more.

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by Anonymous12/29/11

So far so good. However many stories degenerate from here into a bland blow by blow (or should it be lick by lick?) description of sex. You will need to be innovative to maintain my interest. Good luck!

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by Anonymous12/30/11

Good teaser!

I'm really eager to see what would happen next. Please don't give up on your story!

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