All Comments on 'At His Mercy Ch. 02'

and in my greed the chapters can't come fast enough, well done! If you were mine i'd have you chained to your computer so you could churn out chapters faster heheh.

I agree with anon, can't get enough and want more!!! Can't wait for the next chapter

I can see this story ending up with many chapters. It's very good so far but I think the chapters are too small; this chapter and the first chapter should have been contained in one submission.

I'm in love with this story! I love where it's going and hope you write more

Can't wait for more!!

Please continue this story. I've been checking back for a new chapter way too often. =)

I really enjoyed the first chapter and was excited when I saw you posted a second. This chapter still has the same quality as the first one did and I'm eager to read more.

This is lovely.

Amazing, please keep writing. :)

these stories are really goog, can't wait to read your next installment.

Such a brilliant story, I really hope that you'll finish it because there's nothing worse than reading a story you really get into and then realise that the author is never going to finish. So please finish!

I completely understand; I hate it when that happens, too! I'm still working on this story (along with bits and pieces of several others D: ) and will post the next chapter as soon as I can. :)

Been checking this every few days for updates since it was published originally. Please please pleeaaaassseeee post some more chapters!

Better than alot of the shit on here. Too many stories just get started and abandoned. I enjoyed reading what you've written so far, and I would greatly interest me to read more.

Wow! I am so loving this story! Def keep going with it! I never comment on stories but this is by far one of the best I've read so far. Great job!

Please add to this story!! It has such potential and I'd really like to see what happens!

When are you gonna post the new chapter?!?!?! GAH!!

I know ordinary life is busy, but every night I sign into my account, click on your story and every night my heart breaks because there is nothing more to see. Please write more.

This story is so interesting, it deserves to be completed, won't you please write more and bring it to a satisfying finish?

Love it so far and very interested. Is there another part due to come out soon?

Good job so far, please finish!

Really well written , but write mooore please

I need another chapter now, please. It is just getting good

More right now! How could you end it with that ending!!

OKAY KIDDO. YOU'VE HAD 4 MONTHS. TIME TO GET CRACKING! i KNOW IT'S A PAIN TO DRAG OUT OF BED IN THE MORNING', AND GO TILL DARK BUT YOU HAVE FOLKS WAITIN' TO READ THE REST OF THE STORY. YOU HAVE A RESPONSIBILTY(SP) TO THE PUBLIC TO FINISH WHAT YA STARTED. COME, YOU CAN DO IT!

I'm actually so upset that this series appears to be abandoned. It showed so much promise. I loved reading it, as short as it was. I hope you get around to completing it when time allows for it.