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What'll I Do? Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/29/11

hhmmm

way too short! still waiting for a happy ending :o) r

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by cannd12/29/11

Wow, don't waste time in Tahiti thinking about us! You lucky bastard :)
As for the story, I think we're missing a very key component here. We still don't know why Nate did what he did. Why did he cheat? Was their relationship as perfect as he says or is that his view looking back on it. We all tend to forget the negative when we look back later. I'm thinking a flashback to the time when he cheated would be really good. It would help us to understand who Nate is. I found him to be pretty damn cocky to essentially say 'hey you still love me and you'd probably take me back and since I still want you...' I'd like to understand this guy. Is he one of those people who just destroy what is good in their lives? I hope he also can convince Thaniel and the reader that there is a reason to believe he won't just do this again. I hope Thaniel surprises him and expects him to prove he is different. I really don't want him to just prove Nate right by taking him back easily. Happy New Year, and enjoy your vacation!

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by VampWriter12/29/11

Trying to be patient...

Love the story, but I want to know Nate's motives as well. And thanks for the greetings from Tahiti. I'm in New England and it's only 21 degrees!

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by cliffgirl0812/29/11

Please stop the teasing

Your short chapters are killing us.

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by nomoretears0012/29/11

*laugh*

Tahiti... Now that was just mean, lol!

Ditto what Cannd said. I want to know what's driving this. Nate is still pretty unclear to me but I think you're working up to something with him.

Have a good vacation!

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by fukmi_allnite12/30/11

Way to rub it in.

Tahiti. I guess this update kinda, sorta makes me not be jealous of you a little less.

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by Anonymous02/20/12

Really?

I love your story and all, but really? It takes you that fuckin long to write a short friken page. Dam you are slow as fuck. No offence. Keep writing.

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by dinkyboots04/24/12

where is the next page . pull your fingers from your ass and give us the bloody story.? i am pulling my nails out waiting....

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by tac_naynwaffles06/15/13

Don't end it here.

It can go is so many different directions from here! More please!

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by Anonymous09/09/15

there better be more or lm going to be pissed off !;)LOVE U

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by Anonymous07/31/16

what a crap ending

seriously

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