Here's why. I missed reading Chapter 1 so I read it before proceeding to Chapter 2. There were times when you had me laughing. The character, Dan... how can I put it... is so unabashedly precocious that it's precious. It's like he's cool and yet excited all at the same time. Keep going.
Thanks for the series. I have often thought of my friend Trevor's mom, and this story got me thinking about her as your lead character. I laughed at some of your sly comments, about how the situation developed, and hot erotica many of the scenes were. I once stumbled across a couple doing it in the park. They were down a path like you mentioned, and I was going down to the river to fish. Was paying little attention to anything until I heard something ahead, and when I turned the corner there was a girl giving a blow job to an older guy. I didn't know what to do so I watched for a couple seconds until the guy noticed me. I turned and walked away but it was so hot seeing them. I pictured myself stumbling upon you and Dan's mom in the park!
I enjoyed the two characters and it was a nice touch how they ended up in the park!
MORE PLEASE. There is so much more you can do with this.
Omg, you need to finish. This is so well writtem for this site.
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