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Bottom-Slayer: 1st Bottom Slain

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/29/11

....

Writing was ok, just didn't care for the story. I guess I'm more of a HEA (for both people) kind of reader.

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by Anonymous12/29/11

lovely,

Ned a new bitch ??

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by Anonymous12/29/11

can't wait for part 2 about the dad and the brother........good work

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by Anonymous12/30/11

Amazing, loved this so much.

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by onethumper12/30/11

fantasy

Thanks you wrote out what was in my head. Now, secret is out!
Great story.

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by Anonymous12/30/11

more!

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE, loved it

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by Male Mare12/31/11

A Fantasy come true!

Wonderful, erotic mind provoking story! I Love ir read it over and over, more please

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by vortec212/31/11

very hot

very hot story would love to hear more ,like you i love humiliation and very much so between two women im one of your biggest fans , please keep writing

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by vortec212/31/11

hearing from others

i would love to hear from others that are turned on by being humiliated its such a hot topic

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by nuances401/01/12

thanks

a very good story..you know how take us in the action and suspense..the second part seems can be hot with brother and dad..hope read you soon thanks

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by Anonymous01/04/12

OMG. This happened to me in real life

Add in regular ass whippings with a belt & i'm the prep

back up cocksucker for a bull stud? Check
blackmail pics? Check
promise not to tell? Check & of course a big lie every cockucker
gets "told" on
can't wait for more bottom slaying

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by Anonymous01/06/12

This is the best god damn story I have ever read.

This is the best god damn story I have ever read. I have had a fantasy of being made to sit and pee and be ablack man prison bitch forever.. I am a 5'3" 130lb cute whiteboy and ...I loved your story .. I crossdress am cute and take REAL black cock... PLEASE KEEP IT UP

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by sassysasha8902/07/12

As you already figured, I loved your stories and hope to see more of them soon.

This is one of my favorites from you; I keep rereading it because it's so hot! I wonder whose his second bottom.

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by tvsally69211/06/12

white boy for black cocks..!!!

i really enjoyed reading this story.. it reminded me of the time that i was turned out by a black boy..... i was in grade school---6th. grade, and he was in 10th. grade... he was on the football team and played very well... he had a thing for white girls who seemed to fall all over him... once i caught a pretty white girl sucking his cock in the basement of the school.. both of them saw me and asked me not to tell anybody... i said, okay... as she continued to suck his cock i enjoyed watching him derive pleasure from her mouth and i got an erection that i couldn't hide... my small cock was rock hard... the following week he saw me coming out of school and asked me to go home with him so that he could help me with my homework... we got there in 10 minutes and he went into the bathroom for a few minutes.. when he came into the living room i could see that he had an erection.. he noticed me looking at his bulge and asked me if i ever sucked a black cock... i said no, and he said he knew i wanted to please him like the white girl who sucked him off as i watched... he pulled out is dick and i was shocked at how hard it was... he told me to feel it with my hand... well, i did and was sucking it within minutes... he came in my mouth and told me i was his faggot fuckboy from now on... he had me and the following week he fucked my ass fast, hard and deep.... he had me often after that and i became a white fuckboy toy for black studs ....

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by Armphid11/28/12

Fantastic!

I have loved your stories in the TS section of Literotica and this is just as excellent. I love how you used the interracial trope as well, it added a lot of heat to an already incredibly engaging and sexy piece.

I don't know if you plan on writing more adventures of the "bottom slayer" but I'd be eager to read them if you do.

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by Anonymous01/02/13

great story

i would enjoy reading the sequel to this about karens family.

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by Anonymous02/15/13

great store

I'd like to be Erica!!!

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by cummmthirsty05/12/13

Ur cummthirsty wht boi faggot

I LUVED ur story... Id Luv bein one of ur faggot s .. It seems all I can think about is the Sight, Taste , Feel & Smell of a Big Fat Heavy Blk Cock slappin my faggot face as Im on my knees beggin trying to catch it & Suck IT ,with my hands tied behind my back...Soooo when U do let the faggot have it U can Fuck my faggot Cunt Throat.. & I mean fuck it Balls Deep Plz Master ... & Ur lil wht cocksuckin faggot LUVS boipussy to throat .... I can NOT GET Enough cummmmmmm to swallow

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by Anonymous05/18/13

I would love to see a sequel where he shoved hid nice big cock into another twink white boy, maybe a college setting?

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by dlm0ren007/18/13

Where's my Erica?

This story is hot as hell!!!

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by sassysasha8908/10/13

Where's more Jim: The Bottom Slayer?!

I'd like to see that "other story" about Karen's college brother and her old school dad. More gay and incest stories from you period. ;3

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by Anonymous08/10/13

great story....

i love your story because i love the girly submissive fagboi scenario. i love when a cute black stud forces me to be his feminine cum dump. When I'm dressed I really look girly. my recent guy treated me with love and passion and made me totally feel like his girlfriend. i loved him and would do anything he asked.

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by Anonymous10/20/13

slay my bottom pussy also...

take it, own it, use it....on yahoo im as luvsexybrownskin...

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by Anonymous04/10/14

More, more, more

Love it! I want to be eric(a).

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by JamieFHFun04/23/14

Hot Hot Hot

need a Jim or Bubba with a BBC to make me hiss faggot cum slut
jamie in phx

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by cyberking00109/10/14

oh yes :-)

oh fucking YES ... i don't know whom to be more jealous of ... the hot black fuck stud who is getting his jet black fuck stick sucked off, or the hot white twink boy who is down on his knees with his lips wrapped around that gorgeous black fuck meat and wearing that hot sticky goo all over his face ... yummmmm (sam)

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by Anonymous12/18/14

Excellent !

Love how Eric became Erica. The name change reflects Eric's true sexual nature, a cum dump for BBC. Be great to read how Karen's father is 'turned'.

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by Anonymous12/21/14

Closeted gay

Reads like the guy who wrote this is the "faggot". He seems much more interested in men than in women.

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by Anonymous01/13/15

i had 2 jobs at the time. my night time boss was a domineering politically-incorrect white man in an online order warehouse

Whenever things were not the way he liked he shouted and screamed at us workers. For the first time in my life someone's shouting affected me the way it did: i felt something like a mild electric jolt im my ass which was pulsating. It was more than just fear. Health & safety regulation required that no less then 2 persons must be in the warehouse at all times. He offered me extra hours which i did need but perhaps a part of my psyche i hetherto was not aware of wanted to be near him.
Basically him & me were alone at the place for 3 hours 3 times a week.
At a point he said to me, "You kind of freeze when i start shouting, are you afraid of me... don't be, you are my friend, before i would fire you i would offer you a spanking as a plea bargain... which one would you choose?"
To cut the long story short i did suck his dick & he did fuck me up my ass.
Unlike Jim, once my boss established his domination, he was rather gentle with me.
His cock was rock hard and would stay that way for a long time. During anal intercourse i would come without even touching my dick.
Our affair stopped when the company offered him a position in a different part of the country.

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by Anonymous01/24/15

Great JerkOff Story

But I'm not sure how realistic it is in real life.

I've seen a few black cocks over the years that made me think about sucking one but I never took that step. I've also seen a few white cocks that made me think about sucking one too, but again, I never took that step.

Maybe one day I'll see one that will make me step over that line.

Reading hot stories like this does make me think about it a lot more.

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by Anonymous04/11/15

love to be his faggot pussy and cum toy, be abused by his BBC. cause my first black cock was my trigger to loving and obeying my masters they filled my holes, deepthroated me banged my ass hard and long,i never complain to scared of losing the wonderful pleasures those BBCs are giving me and my masters dominations

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by Anonymous11/25/15

Revisit

Still hoping you'll revisit this character and create a sequel.. or more.

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by Anonymous01/20/16

Very good start to a story

Very good start I would definitely like to read more on how much this boy gets used and more including out side used would be great !

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by Anonymous03/16/16

Wishing,, wanting, needing

Am a Straight? Guy that has switch hit a few times and really, really liked it, but it would have been even better if I had been treated as a submissive and called a few sissy names. My last one(10 yrs. ago) was black. Did him 3 or 4 times and he still calls me but neither can host. He was too big to go into my throat but I did love the feel of It and got off watching in the mirror as it slid in and out of my mouth. Prior to that I was doing an older white guy a few times and once, after he finished in my mouth he led me to his 2nd bedroom where a friend of his was waiting. I did him also.

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by Anonymous07/17/16

Resonance

It's hard to explain, but there are some men who, with just one look at me, do just know how willing I am to serve them. It's only happened twice, but both times I dropped to my knees on command and sucked a complete stranger off. The only way I can manage my pervertion to beat off to stories like this one. Thank-you for providing a safe outlet.

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by Anonymous07/27/16

First Black CockS

I had been Sucking white cocks, with the occasional Fucking for a few years when my first chance to take Black Cocks arrived. My sleep was disturbed, so I went for a walk and JUST HAPPENED to go to a well known Dogging layby near Teesside in the UK. I was walking about playing with my small cockette when a car window went down and a voice said "You suck cock white boy?" I reached in and fondled a BIG cock, "sure!" I said. There were four black guys in the car and I was dragged into the back and had a LARGE cock stuffed into my throat, as the car started to move. I was taken to a flat and was frankly (if fairly willingly) RAPED, as their sexual entertainment, Sucking and being Fucked well into the next afternoon (they let me call in a sicky to work) They offered me a (blindfolded) return to the layby, or to become one of their regular white pussybois? surprise, they fucked me in and out of fem clothing til I moved for my job. I still take white cocks, but if there is a choice, it's BLACK COCK for me. Pussyboi A man da

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by spannky09/07/16

Yes hot excellent story

Very good looking white guy hear wishing that was me sucking big black cock and taking it up my ass for the first time

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by DregothCaptions12/24/16

An excellent start

I can't wait to see this one evolve with the next installment!

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by Anonymous02/20/17

I loved your story

I have had the pleasure of being used several times by a massive black cock. There is just something nice about having a massive load blown deep into your tight ass.
When it happens to me, I drip for several days. I love it.

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