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SweetOblivion over 12 years ago

A satisfactory and sensually descriptive, journeyman effort; but I suggest you consider more individual urges that might be ascribed to you alone to make a real difference in future verses. Sweet O.

tazz317 over 12 years ago

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for the lonely. TK U MLJ LV NV

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