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by LoneStarRider12/30/11

oh, wow........

Yuppers, the reverend's wife just told a lie. And a bad one, at that. (Thirteen-year-old walking across town?! When it gets dark fairly early?) I trust that the lie, and the Reverend's knowledge {or lack thereof} will soon become revealed to all the characters involved.
[Did anyone take a picture of the hand-print on Annie's face?]

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by kuroukiphoenyx12/31/11

you have returned!!!

Yeaaaaa! *hugs*

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by Anonymous01/03/12

AWESOME SO FAR

This is a great story so far. I know it is only supposed to be 10 parts but I really hope you write more this is a great story with an awesome cast of characters and I can't wait to find out what happens to dear sweet ex mother-in-law :).

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by Anonymous01/03/12

great job!

I just read all ten parts in one sitting and may I say great writing. The characters have developed shape and they seem realistic. Awesome job. I have one complaint though, make the chapters longer!

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by Anonymous01/22/12

Yay!!!

Your back!!! I've kept up with this story from the begining. Please add more!!!

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by HaydenBraeburn01/22/12

Thank you!!

I'm working on Chapter 11 right now. I can't promise it will be longer--these chapters have been pretty consistently 3000-4000 words--but I can promise the wait will be shorter :)

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