I Didn't Know

I don't understand why stories like these are on a erotica site...?

This story should be placed in a non-sexual category...

Cute fun story

Well written...enjoyed the brevity and irony.

AWFUL

silly and way over done

Good story.

5 stars for a "cuckold strikes back" story. Thanks for writing.

Keep them coming!

Short, sweet and to the point! Well done and thanks for writing!

His true brothers came through....

And he dumped the cheating bitch. Great short story.

More please

Love it....few words....a great mesage.

Kind of funny

Needs better editing but fun. Thanks for writing.

I have read it earlier on SOL. Good flash story.

Quick and to the point

Cute story my friend, 5 from me.

Fun Read.

Thanks for sharing.

STILL CLUELESS AFTER A HEADS UP

and yet he pondered and provided.. TK U MLJ LV NV

Well, it's a story.

As a personal preference, I don't like to have a direct role in my work, but that is me. Didn't like it when Clive Cussler did it. Don't like it here. I hate kicking down the fourth wall and injecting 'reader reality' into a story.

But one of the great things as a writer is you get to do what you want.

I Love It!

Bro's Befo Ho's ! ! !

fun read

thanks for the story.

I liked it

Our hero here must have been on medication though. I might have found myself less calm, but still a cute story.

Quick & Clean

Excellantly written! Youve been on a roll the last couple weeks. Thanks

Did I miss something?

Weren't she fucking the 'bros'.? What kind of friends is that?

Another winner

5 --nice write!

A tightly written story

Very fast pace to this short story.

I enjoyed the read, thanks

to answer a few of the comments

English is my first language, Born in the USA. If you don't like the story I'm okay with that. Some of you out don't exactly write stories where the man is a man. Nakdsub and cpete are a couple of my favs, Thanks guys.

Way to go Huedog

I agree with you. Those that don't write themselves get to vote if they like a story or not. They can also choose whether or not to read another story by a particular author. They have the right to leave constructive criticism (help the author develop their craft). However, no one and I mean no one has the right to leave disparaging comments questioning nationality or any other personal comment.

Now, I did find your twist of the board membership amusing at the end. Over all a decent story that I enjoyed reading. Please keep writing.

Your the man.

It feels good to read a story written by a real man and not a wimp. Please continue writing. You rock.

Makes me wonder...

why was his wife doing so many men, believing she wouldn't get caught? And, all at the lodge her husband belonged to.

#2 DIDNT KNOW DIDNT CARE UNTIL

the clock finally struck home, TK U MLJ LV NV

Harry hit it. This is a steaming pile of puke...

An emotionless, clueless lesson on how not to write. Everything about this story was offensive. Fortunately it was untainted by any hint of logic.

How old is huedog? must be a teen, I'd guess, and not doing so very well with the ladies. At least that's how he writes. I'm glad I read this because it will save me from reading any more of his pathetic crap.

Not great but not as bad as hiv would have it, since it's just like....

....90% of the other crap here. So it doesn't stand out as a whole PILE of shit. Or at least it's not steaming.

I see the hater are out

blankshootingpete, harryindrag and the rest of the haters. just like I say when I make my comments, I didn't have to read it, that goes for you asses to....next time look at the rest of the cuckold shit you guys love, and thanks for the feed back. I look at the source.

Enjoyable and far from over the top

To all haters its a story deal with it

Amusing Diversion

I do not know why many people feel that this should be a true story site and pass the reality test. Take a look at the world's literature. Personally I think that the dumpers are here to dump and could care less about enjoying a story...

Great Read

I don't get why some whore wives believe it is their right to fuck other men. The cunt in this story fucked around and got caught. It's just a shame we don't actually know what happened to her after the divorce. Hopefully she'll eventually rot in hell.

Ooooh I'm on a roll today.
HA

Not your most believable

But fun anyway as long as you ignore some things -

In no special order - he is a member of lodge but does not know the board members? Hue has security footage of the waiters doing her but takes no action until he finds out?
She is banging that many guys in the lodge space and no one has made an issue of it before this? Nice friends.
Either she is smart enough to hide this from him that well or she is so stupid she pulls trains without birth control and then asks him if they should keep it? Get rid of it and keep playing would seem more credible if she was willing to consider getting rid of it at all.
He is forewarned but still could not see all that activity in front of his face?

Ah well who cares she got fucked and fucked over -

No your not an Asshole!

The last paragraph starts with the sentence "I know you think I am an Asshole". My reply to that is No your not an asshole, your a man. Only a cuck would think you are one. Loved the story. Loved the 85/15 split.

No revenge just confrontation

The story has a revenge tag in the loving wives category. I didn't grasp the revenge aspect. The wife was an out of control skank with a singles promiscuous lifestyle. Marriages to her were to her personal definition and a complete farce. She possessed no ability to demonstrate any loyalty to her spouse or marriage. Her behavior demonstrated a high degree of mental health issues and dangerous behavior to her own detriment and her spouse exposing them to STD's. The story was well written but lacked emotion and the wife's thinking in thus sordid affair. Since it is a fantasy and the characters are nearly cartoon type it serves well as a no brain wanker.

What is the name of that lodge?

That's the kind of club all good men need to join.

Woulda been nice to get some insight into the wife's thinking

and who's baby was it? She's 45 and not taking birth control? I liked the story overall but these questions are rolling around in my brain.

Bahahaha !

I miss this Author !

BTB IS NEVER OVER THE TOP

as long as no violence occurs the mental damage will suffice. TK U MLJ LV NV

I don't either

75 dollars in pennies is a box and a half. It's not freaking roket surgery

Your Stories Keep Getting Better

So many writers do not know how to end stories. That is where you excell.