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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/31/11

good ending

I have no idea why the other guy is bitching about it.

you play with fire, sooner or later your ass is going to get burned.

simple concept, no?

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by adgeon12/31/11

good ending

but i wouldn't marry her if i was him. thanks for the story.

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by Anonymous12/31/11

Why should

Jack be in jail? Where's the justice in that?

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by Lickideesplit12/31/11

GaF

I am preggo neutral, but 'get' a guy being a preggophile. The mechanics of the story (spelling, punctuation, grammar, etc.) are adequate. However, I gave it three stars because I cannot figure out who, if anybody (except maybe Carolyn) I should give a flying fuck about ! ? ! ?

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by JonTaylor12/31/11

OK Story But...

Add a lst sentence: "Oh, and by the way, I lost my job and my license and am now flipping burgers.

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by Anonymous12/31/11

Way to go Jack!!!

I would like to see Jack keep beating the shit out of Austen. Hey Austen How would you like your pregnant wife being fucked by an asshole like you?. Probably not. Then again you cant have a conscience to begin with. Real loser Go Jack!!!

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by jasonnh12/31/11

What a cushy deal

He's certainly having a good time. It's a little absurd that he is finding all these women willing to fuck him. I get the setup that they are pregnant and being neglected by their husbands. But Lamaze classes aren't all that big so that they can have personal attention. He's got several females every week that are willing to fuck him? OK, if you say so.

The sex is well written. Sex is sex, pregnant or not.

As to the ending, Wow, what a surprise. A guy that is fucking married women gets caught and gets his lights punched out. He has more to worry about than getting married because he will almost certainly be fired and never hired in the health field again. Maybe he can move across the country.

Overall I enjoyed the story. It was told from a dopey, horny guy's point of view but what the heck, there are a lot of them around.

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by Headguy01/01/12

Lost steam

The section about Carrie was very hot and well-written. The section on Sabrina seemed like it ran out of energy; significantly, it told us but didn't show us.

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by Anonymous01/01/12

HE got what he deserved

And now he's stuck with a controlling, conniving, slut who'll cheat on him as well....and considering Austen is likely to be out of a job, it won't be long before Sabrina will be kicking him to the curb.

Serves him right.

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by Duna01/01/12

Ha, ha, ha....

It is very good consequence story, the predator became victime.
BTW JPB has an excellent story where the pregnant woman went to the neighbor guy for sex at both her pregnencies, because her husband did not want to injure the babies and she became faithful wife again after both childbirthes.

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by Duna01/01/12

Do not listen to your heart, but your brain

@ Anon To cause serious injure or death to a person (in immidiate anger) punished with prison in the Western Culture. It does not matter the person was the loverboy, he is not stalker or traspassing person, because he is with the permission of the wife in the marital bed. Every story here THERE IS A GOOD EXAMPLE FOR THE HUSBAND READERS, if somebody meets similar situation do not listen to his heart but his brain. No to use constant injury cousing instrument as gun, karate/box skills, but electric shock instruments better. The best the modern Figaro skills (fe. secret foto/video shots), to turn back from the house queitly and to organize more more valuable thing and money from the common property to secret place befor starting the divorce to use later after the divorce (to divorce from a pregnant woman forbidden according the USA states family law). For example I read from a commenter there is/was a bike service in a USA city where there is/was a special thing before starting divorce the husbands sold his Harley Davidson for small money and the firm maintens and storage them they can/could rebuy it for small moneythe same bike later.
I like the high way also to find a better second mate.

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by Anonymous01/02/12

Good sause

Mister goose

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by Duna04/28/13

I am curiouse

This sort of story is more interesting with an epiloge. After the hospital he helped the ex wife (with newborn) whose ex husband is in prison for 5 years.

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by Tavadelphin07/30/13

Well all good things must come to an end -

He is not good so he will not end --- at least not well lol

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