His Wife's Butt

spanking a cute butt makes a women even moire submissive.

There are too many fragmented sentences to make this story readable.

Excellent

A big five

Can't wait - - -

Can't wait: 1) for her to actually wear that skirt, subconsciously wondering why, when she knows it is so so wrong; 2) for him to come back, eventually even when the husband is home; 3) for that MFF; 4) maybe for him to introduce her to his brothers, or friends .. a LOT of ways to take this. Stay with it!

No Hollywood Ending

It's great when a story involves rape that doesn't have the rape victim coming over and over again. He raped the bitch in the ass and she took it because she had no way not to. It's the way it's supposed to be.

Fuck Me

Who the hell are you? It's like someone watching the fantasies in my head and deciding to give me an early Christmas present. Your writing makes me orgasm.

5 stars

:)

I would've rated 5

'Your your your!?!?!!!!!'
For God's sake the word is YOU'RE
YOUR TOYS. YOUR CUNT.
YOU'RE HAPPY. YOU'RE SAD.