by oneg
Sorry about that, I've just been a bit busy over Christmas...there is more and will be on here very soon.
great start but unfinished, if I am reading a story for pleasure and it stops, it is like your girl leaving half way through sex.
There's a second part to this story which is pending at the moment.
then what???? She cut them off????? That was not a cliffhanger. Good beginning but, but the end was very deflating.