And you did warn me, this is a much darker chapter. So since we went back in time is Leila/Ghost the woman Judith just put to the test? It will be interesting to see which direction you take the next chapter, will you stay dark or go towards the light? hehe-he
I hope that you continue to post on a more frequent basis because I would like to follow your story.
but warnings or not, this is just too horrific to stick with.
I've actually written all twelve chapters--they just take a while to upload, since they all have italics that an editor needs to manually format.
I'd like to clarify that this is only a few nights before the "present" of Ch. 02, though it's at least several days after Ch. 01. (The prostitute isn't anyone with a name.)
Well I have read all three pieces and am curious as to where it will lead. I do look at this as non erotic but am enjoying it non the less.
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