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by MizT01/03/12

Judith

isn't going to be to happy w/Randall now is she? What will Randall do w/Neil now that he is under contract. I love the way you are jumping between what happens in the demon city and what happens in the neutral city. And now the demons are starting their invasion plan. I look forward to the next chapter to see how things are progressing.

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