All Comments on 'Blaine and Trey - Week 01'

by gizm4c

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amber1312amber1312about 12 years ago

Oohh baited breath for the next chapter

nomoretears00nomoretears00about 12 years ago
Good start!

*laugh* I'm like Amber, I can't wait to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great

first chapter! i'm really looking forward to the next ch. and seeing where it goes :D

Uchena

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
love it so far

i wonder what did blaine experienced in his previous relationship which not good as he said it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wonderful Start

Can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe a bit longer though? <vbg>

VampWriterVampWriterabout 12 years ago
Excellent!

I really like this so far. One suggestion, however, is to use contractions more often in dialogue. Few people say "I am" instead of "I'm." Other than that, you have a great start. I also liked the disclaimer at the top. I love romances that build slowly! Don't hurry yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Good start.

prostock69prostock69about 12 years ago

I'm very interested in seeing how this goes. I think Blaine gave some good advice to Trey about trying to either resolve the issues between he and Gage or finding answers so he can have closure and move on.

However, I think it's unrealistic for two men to have a long distant relationship where they only see each other a few times a year. Of course he's going to "cheat." I couldn't do it.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 11 years ago

I agree with prostock and am on my way to the next chapter to say how it went and goes hehe

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