All Comments on 'Batman: Harem 04'

Please contenue and don't be afraid to make them longer I can't wait to see ivy more humiliated in detail

Nice ideas so far, just hope that Batman's harem stays as his harem, didn't like it when you brought in Nightwing for a bit, Batman should be the only guy in those villainesses lives. Other than that, an enjoyable read so far and can't wait for more.

Great series, hope it goes for a while.

Would really like longer chapters, and more story development, but you have a great thing going here.

Please keep it up.

Would love for Batgirl and Batman travel to europe and find Talia. As a girl that finds this hot.... I think Barbara should start to fall in love with Bruce over Nightwing. Not fans of the Robins. Love in costume Batgirl/ Batman hookups... Especially w how steamy you write.

Thank you all for so many great reviews and comments. Just so everyone knows, I don't do these because I can't make my own characters. I am actually a professional writer. I do these because I love the Batman Comics, and liked this idea I had. Also, the next chapter may take a bit because I am working extra hard on it, so forgive my timeframes. That is all.

Awesome story so far, I'm really looking forward to seeing who you've got next. (I really hope Talia gets what's coming to her at some point.)

Are any more of the extended bat family going to get involved? (Spoiler, Huntress, etc?)

The first four chapters are great. What I want to read about next would be in chapter 5 which I would hope continues Batman's re-education of Catwoman, Poison Ivy and Harley Quinn. I would hope that all three become even more dependant on getting some of Batman's "equipment" as well as an enhancement of Batman and Batgirl's relationship. Perhaps there could be some more detail about the villains such as Joker? It would be interesting to show Joker's reaction to discovering that his former assistant/bed partner is now servicing Batman! I do hope there's more coming!