All Comments on 'Spacegirl: Kentauris-7 Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
ITS BACK

I read this years ago and I am happy to now see it here.

DannyGirl31DannyGirl31about 12 years ago

Omg! I love it!

I cannot wait to read the rest...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Oh..really. COOL

Thats some fucked up shit bro sorry didn't do much for me..cheers for in depth and innovation and progressional kinky transatlanticism though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
sorry to be the first

I don't know who you're writing for, but I left the story after a supposedly experience trooper left her rifle behind to follow an odor. This is the action of a newbie who won't make it through her first engagement. Your concept isn't bad but you're writing in an area that you don't know about. Learn something about soldiers and combat or choose a different area for your writing skills.

sporgasboredsporgasboredover 5 years agoAuthor
Bye!

Cinematically potent pheromones, Francis. It's sci-fi wank fiction, not Stephen Ambrose.

pyramidqueenpyramidqueenover 5 years ago
I love these kinds of stories

I love it and plan to read the entire series

taco1085taco1085over 4 years ago
wow

Wow, found you by accident and going to read the entire series... what a start, i sure hope the rest is as good as this chapter... thank you

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