Pretty hot tale,I loved them piercing her!My only negative comment is this should be in non consentual,least until Karen accepts being a slave without drugs or force
This is a great story! I would like you to continue it with maybe a little background before you launch into the future. But I definitely would like to read more...a lot more!
It's a pity this story ended so quickly, but you are writing so well that I'm sure we'll have something new and just as thrilling soon! Five stars and my sincere thanks.
No bathroom? Friday night to Monday morning? It feels like this could have been better detailed. Largely error free, but the use of drugs avoids the resistance, the fear. Takes the emotion out of the experience and leaves only the telli of the event. And the throwaway line about her virginity, what was that?
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pretty hot
Pretty hot tale,I loved them piercing her!My only negative comment is this should be in non consentual,least until Karen accepts being a slave without drugs or force
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This is a great story! I would like you to continue it with maybe a little background before you launch into the future. But I definitely would like to read more...a lot more!
AWESOME
Great story so far !! Am looking forward to more !!
You're a good author. I've read a couple of your stories and enjoyed them all. Awesome job!
And she ate when?......
C'mon, food is somewhat important, doncha think?
You've named yourself quite appropriately!
Besides some little glitches in this story's progression, you have a fairly complete tale that'll draw in most any reader! Do continue, Ok?
Very nice indeed!
It's a pity this story ended so quickly, but you are writing so well that I'm sure we'll have something new and just as thrilling soon! Five stars and my sincere thanks.
Besides no food
No bathroom? Friday night to Monday morning? It feels like this could have been better detailed. Largely error free, but the use of drugs avoids the resistance, the fear. Takes the emotion out of the experience and leaves only the telli of the event. And the throwaway line about her virginity, what was that?
Great Way to get a Job!
Fantastic!! It will be an interesting story as to what happens in the office & to other workers!
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