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Scales of the Marsh Ch. 00

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by Anonymous01/04/12

good start

good start, what would make it better is if you told us what they were (dragons, wolves, tigers....). Everything else was top notch

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by Anonymous01/04/12

Elder scroll!!

Nice start picked up from the start you chose argonian race to make your story cant wait to read more

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by tikii1201/15/12

Nice!

@Anonymous 1 If you were a fan of the Elder Scrolls you would know that if The Black Marsh is mentioned, it means the character is more than likely an Argonian. That aside, This is an superb beginning to this story. I can't wait for you to upload more. Will whatever is in the lake be her guide to sexual fulfillment?

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by Galadreyil01/20/12

Trying to keep on track.

As enticing as it would be to make this a sexual fantasy, I don't plan on going into beastiality at all on this one. Given Jasriella's nature she also won't be taking a mate any time soon. If you think about it how often do you see warrior maidens getting laid then pregnant? It leaves her and the unborn/hatched children vulnerable to the her enemies.

Don't worry though, there will be enough sexual scenes to satisfy.

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by Anonymous02/18/12

Epic!

That was awesome! For a moment I completely forgot what I was reading and thought I was reading a book. I will wait with great anticipation for the next chapter, after reading the final seal I know you can make this into an incredible story

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