by Sluver
I enjoy stories where one woman helps a guy fuck another woman up the ass. This was a good one. Yes, there was a problem with the formatting of the text, and a few typos. The editors let this stuff through, yet they rejected one of my stories because the commas were in the wrong place (?)
Shit.. I really don't care about formatting.. I know how to read a story no matter how its written..
Welcome to Literotica! Always good to see a firt time author do so well on a first submission. Great desire, good descriptions, and hot sex. Thanks for posting, and keep writing.
A great story about sharing and helping out someone in a time of need. The descriptions were vivid and stimulating.
wow was that great u made me so hot just reading one more like this and I am waking my man. We will be in heaven
A compassionate anal tale for a change! A pleasant way to end an evening!
Thanks for posting
This is a great read - starts out with a little up front info, but then jumps right into action! Thanks. Going to be reading this one a couple of times.
Not a brutal, ass-ravaging anal fuck-fest, like so many of the boring, boring stories on here, but how intro to anal should be. Well done!