All Comments on 'Cruel Asian Girlfriend Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hot stuff!

A marvellous story, one I hope you will add to very soon - thank you.

pdv990pdv990about 12 years ago
Great start

Hope you write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
More rice, please.

Good story, but she doesn't seem very asian.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good story

It is good that an Asian woman asserts herself. Many under-endowed men seek Asian women thinking they will appreciate what little they offer. Many put up with being short changed but some find other men to satisy them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

This was excellent, please continue

subharrysubharryabout 12 years ago
Asian mistress

That was so hot. I wish she was my mistress.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I don't understand

This is directed at the person who waid that thing about Asian woman. If any woman is so shallow that they would cheat on their boyfriend/husband just because he doesn't have fucking 9 inch long dick, then I want nothing to do with her, don't care what race she is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
4 Stars

Interesting and workable story-line. However, the story moves too quickly, and your primary character is too much of a "lay-down." The difference between maintaining reader interest and losing it, is often determined by the main story characters either having or not having emotional conflict. Seeing that you intend to write multiple chapters, my guess is that you would prefer to maintain reader interest.

Though, I suppose your method will do for those who truly enjoy this genre, and are just looking for a quick wank.

bat_08bat_08over 10 years ago
Amazing new stories

I'm so pumped. I just found the rest of your stories posted under the name of TA Sexton. Can't wait to read them…you are amazing!

msbishop702msbishop702over 6 years ago
So sexy

Love to meet a sexy lady like her

Claudia69Claudia696 months ago

Great start to a kinky series..

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