by tasx007
A marvellous story, one I hope you will add to very soon - thank you.
It is good that an Asian woman asserts herself. Many under-endowed men seek Asian women thinking they will appreciate what little they offer. Many put up with being short changed but some find other men to satisy them
This is directed at the person who waid that thing about Asian woman. If any woman is so shallow that they would cheat on their boyfriend/husband just because he doesn't have fucking 9 inch long dick, then I want nothing to do with her, don't care what race she is.
Interesting and workable story-line. However, the story moves too quickly, and your primary character is too much of a "lay-down." The difference between maintaining reader interest and losing it, is often determined by the main story characters either having or not having emotional conflict. Seeing that you intend to write multiple chapters, my guess is that you would prefer to maintain reader interest.
Though, I suppose your method will do for those who truly enjoy this genre, and are just looking for a quick wank.
I'm so pumped. I just found the rest of your stories posted under the name of TA Sexton. Can't wait to read them…you are amazing!