Best Present Ever: Cheerleader Orgy

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Part 3: Milf neighbor is finally done and will be released in June...

Great!!!!

I just loved the two story, I hope i'm not the only one asking you to continue the stories, please!!!!! Congratulations!!!!!

Opening presents on Christmas Eve... Are you insane? Who does that?

Oh, right, hundreds of millions of people.

This is a small issue, and doesn't really detract from the story, but I mention it because it is at the very beginning and starts the story off on a bad note.

In the first and second paragraphs you talk about the nuclear family getting together on Christmas and opening presents on Christmas Eve. You then make a point of mentioning that it is a family tradition going back over 100 years. Opening presents on Christmas Eve/Day, you say. Wow, shocking. Will there be a turkey on Thanksgiving, fireworks on July 4th, eggs on Easter, pumpkins and costumes on Halloween?

My point is this: Why mention that it is a 100-year-old tradition? What does that add to the story? It seems like you are trying to make something noteworthy out of something that ridiculously pervasive and commonplace and not at all noteworthy.
Hundreds of millions of people open presents at Christmas. Mention it and move on.

Otherwise, fine story.

Another story with absolutely no substance but highly praised by your family

"...but wanted to saviour this dream..." You can't make this stuff up. I suppose Christians think Christ is their savor.

Get it right

The nuclear family or elementary family is a term used to define a family group consisting of a pair of adults and their children.

Gifts on Christmas eve

Anonymous:
It's a cultural thing. Just because YOUR family never opened gifts on Christmas eve doesn't mean others don't. In most Latin American countries that is the time they are opened. When I was growing up, all of us kids were allowed to pick one gift our of our Christmas stockings that we could open on Christmas eve and the rest were then saved for the morning. Good compromise in some families. But in a melting pot like America, don't assume everyone has to follow your exact customs.

Fantastic just like I remember it as always Silk you are a great writer

dam girl!!!

you are my newest favorite author...that was hot hot hot!!!!

:) Thank you

Very nicely written, thank you for sharing.

ESTRAGON FOR HIS DEDICATION TO COPY EDITING

was suppose to find a way (supposed)
mouth watering (mouth-watering)
no one other than me could here (hear)
short lived (short-lived )
goddess' (goddess's)
saviour this dream (savour)
New Year's Party (party)

THANKS ! ! ! !

God i love your stories!!!

And it is goddess' when a word ends with an s you never do a 's.

Laughing soo hard...

The comments are trolling the writer and I'm just laughingtoo damn hard... 😂😂😂😂😂

Great enjoyment

Loved the story, very hot, not sure why but I find it extra hot because it comes from the mind of a woman, is that weird? Lol


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Wonderful story

One reason I found this such an interesting story is the way he treated Della. She had been 'put down' all her life because of a weight problem, yet he treated her as a living, breathing human being with feelings and emotions. It made me so glad to see him do that for her. Even if he does nothing else good in this whole series of stories, he will be a hero in my eyes. We witnessed a turning point in her life, something that will be with her forever. He made her realize for the first time in her life, and with only a very few kind words, that she was someone important and was lovable. This shows the power of words, which is something I have known for many years. It is so simple, yet with only a few right words at the right time, you can build someone up to unbelievable heights or rip them to shreds. I have had that experience in my life and have seen what a four simple word said to someone did to their attitude and confidence. All I said was, "You are doing great." I wish more people would read this and take his lesson to heart. Needless to say, this chapter really hit home to me, and I will remember this one for a very long time. THANK YOU!

Character with power

I got to hand It to you, you can really write a character with power. As opposed to his sister, Matt doesn't just have the power to break down, but to build up. With a few kind words, he turned slave into master. Anyone can put down someone and turn them into their bitch, but real power truly comes from those who can also build that bitch up. Although, when's it comes to sandra's orgasm, it seemed cruel to make her use a cucumber instead of getting laid. The way I would've done it was have Matt ask the girls if she earned it. Then have matt command her to get on all fours so that she can take it from behind while she eats out Della while fingering Beth, who wouldn't be on top of Della while making out with her. A show of power from Matt and her former slaves while still getting the good dick.

Twisted

Exciting story. Twisted and perverse, I love it.

This chapter is a huge disappointed

Story should've stuck to the same timeline as the "first chapter". Threw me right for a loop. Don't give sequel tutorials if you don't know how to write a proper sequel? Alas the stories are free so I shouldn't bitch, but I thought this should be mentioned.

Sequels

Hi last commenter..

Unfortunately, this was one of my first sequels and I would sure have written it different if I wrote it now.

Jasmine