Not hard for me to have an orgasm reading your stories J. !
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Anonymous01/06/12
join the world
Join the world general population its just an "ass" not "arse" and it will read easier and better.
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Anonymous01/06/12
Reply
perhaps you need your "world population" to be better educated. To us "yanks" ( US Citzens) it is an ass, to the rest of the world it is actually an arse. as to the Author? Please keep this going, it is well written. keep up the great work.
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Anonymous01/06/12
Excellent story. Incidentally, it is entirely appropriate for a British girl to say "arse" - that is still the standard word in England where the English language came from (the clue's in the name) and only an ignorant cretin would object.
While I will agree that it reads easier for us with "ass", it's more appropriate in England to use "arse" However, to point out that Beth has a sexy British accent makes it sound like the rest of the characters are not from England, but then you call it "Boxing Day" which means they are, so that's rather confusing.
But what really confused me was the fact that you changed the main character's name twice in this story. In the previous part he was Matthew, then at one point someone called him Jeremy and then at the end you changed it to Curtis. Either you copy and pasted someone else's work or you inserted the names from one of your other stories because you weren't paying attention.
I apologize in advance for a major flaw in this story and a minor one:
The main character should be Mathew, but in my sloppiness while writing a couple stories at once I mixed up names. A very sloppy error that I should have caught. (A proper version has been submitted and will be updated in 2-3 days I hope).
Secondly, I am Canadian and just assumed that America had Boxing Day too. All the characters are American, except Beth who is obviously British (thus the use of arse when she speaks...which I personally think sounds nastier for some reason).
Again, I hope u can still enjoy the story even with the silly mistakes.
Jasmine
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Anonymous01/06/12
Every schoolboys dream
Fun story. Friends and relatives can have good times like this
Love this story! I did notice the name changes but it didn't bother me too much. Not a big fan of the word arse, but in its context with the British character Beth's dialog, understandable. This is a total jerk off story and though I couldn't do it(others in the room) I did get painfully hard!
Another great episode, Jasmine. Plenty of hot sex with occasional kinks!
Look forward to the MILF chapter.
Thanks for writing such horny stories.
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Anonymous01/07/12
Keep the brother's name the same
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Anonymous01/07/12
Not uncommon
Sex between siblings is far more common than most people realise. My sister, with whom I have been having regular fucks for over 20 years, claims to know over a dozen other women who have fucked with their brother. My sister has also been fucked by another brother and a cousin.
That was incredible! So dirty, nasty & delicious!! Well done! Looking forward to more of your stories!!!
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Anonymous01/08/12
Great but ......
Great story , i loved it , but u changed the name twice in this story & its not the same as the first part too
it kinda breaks off the continuity thinking who the hell is this ..ah he is that guy .. & stuff like this
but all in all its very good ... keep it up
witing for the science lab partener story :)
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Anonymous01/08/12
Enjoyed it
Not quite as intense/good as the first chapter but quite enjoyable none the less. Am looking forward to the Mrs. Raske conquest. Story could be continued with Allison and his mother also being brought into the fold.
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Anonymous01/09/12
First one was so much better with the teasing and such~
This one is too direct & giving orders.
I prefer the first one.
love the story.
love how the power shift. i can see the two girls having to lick della's chubby hot sexy ass. forced to do all the nasty things she can think of. making them lick her dripping wet pussy after she takes a piss all over there cute faces and bodies. making them thank her and say she is superior to them. making them take compromising pictures to keep in her personal files to keep the power shift were it belongs. forcing them to seductively give her power over there lives forever. mmmm so much going on in my kinky mind. i love the things you silkstockings have put into my kinky mind. thanks keep up the good work my sexy slut school teacher. your a true kinky hot slut that i want to dominate. the kinky hot nasty things i could do to you with my hard black cock.
Simply put....incredibly fucking hot!!!! I can't wait to meet Mrs Raske and Allison!!!
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Anonymous03/15/12
Great story
Enjoyed both chapters. Hope you manage to keep it all in style further on and not fall for the temptation to take short cuts and head turn the story in other directions. A lot of stories here has gone bad because of that. I would advice you not to put too many people in it, as a lot of other stories drowns you in character descriptions and you can't remember half of it. The one's mentioned for further plots seem to give you enough to work with. I'm a sucker for love stories, so a happy ending for the protagonist with Allison in the end would secure this series as a success for me at least. :) As for rivals or obstacles I'm not sure that would be needed here, but if, I would say that nearly always less is more. And one thing in particular. Several stories have added other active males in later chapters to keep things interesting. I hated every single story that did that. None of the plots or characters were intact after that, and everything seemed forced and out of place.
You have good style and a nice flow to the story. Looking forward to read more.
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John
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Anonymous05/07/12
gr8
rly nice, hope it will continue
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Anonymous05/17/12
My my....
Your stories at first(such as the what mom does/n't know series) at first has kinda got me into stockings/pantyhose even more than previously and thrust the idea of getting into feet with them on and now with this series and the making mommy mine..... well that has all sorta gotten me into making some girl completely submit to my will :-) although i just hope i don't run into someone whos will is stronger than mine cause well..... i have a very commanding/bossy/wanting personality and well certain types of people can just make me their total slut :-P although really the only people that could make me their total slut are guys cause i sorta grow feminine being with a guy :-) i would also like to mention how when you do think of one of your parents in a certain manner and can't get that image out that your stories do not help get the parent out of my mind! lol! well this site doesn't help....
Reading this story makes me think of this guy as a bad as hero. The way he took control left me thinking if this guy was real he would be every guys hero
this is great hes not only banging 2 hot girls hes also raising up the sub and helping her out. good story for many reasons
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Anonymous04/05/13
Love your stuff... LOVE this story
I truly hope you continue this series. I know its hard to continue rather than start a new one, but this one has so much potential...the nerdy girl, the hot mom, whats to come of the three submissives he can already use? VERY much looking for more of this one!
English
Thank You J.
Not hard for me to have an orgasm reading your stories J. !
join the world
Join the world general population its just an "ass" not "arse" and it will read easier and better.
Reply
perhaps you need your "world population" to be better educated. To us "yanks" ( US Citzens) it is an ass, to the rest of the world it is actually an arse. as to the Author? Please keep this going, it is well written. keep up the great work.
Excellent story. Incidentally, it is entirely appropriate for a British girl to say "arse" - that is still the standard word in England where the English language came from (the clue's in the name) and only an ignorant cretin would object.
Who cares how it's spelled?
While I will agree that it reads easier for us with "ass", it's more appropriate in England to use "arse" However, to point out that Beth has a sexy British accent makes it sound like the rest of the characters are not from England, but then you call it "Boxing Day" which means they are, so that's rather confusing.
But what really confused me was the fact that you changed the main character's name twice in this story. In the previous part he was Matthew, then at one point someone called him Jeremy and then at the end you changed it to Curtis. Either you copy and pasted someone else's work or you inserted the names from one of your other stories because you weren't paying attention.
Author's Note & Apology
I apologize in advance for a major flaw in this story and a minor one:
The main character should be Mathew, but in my sloppiness while writing a couple stories at once I mixed up names. A very sloppy error that I should have caught. (A proper version has been submitted and will be updated in 2-3 days I hope).
Secondly, I am Canadian and just assumed that America had Boxing Day too. All the characters are American, except Beth who is obviously British (thus the use of arse when she speaks...which I personally think sounds nastier for some reason).
Again, I hope u can still enjoy the story even with the silly mistakes.
Jasmine
Every schoolboys dream
Fun story. Friends and relatives can have good times like this
Loving it!!
Love this story! I did notice the name changes but it didn't bother me too much. Not a big fan of the word arse, but in its context with the British character Beth's dialog, understandable. This is a total jerk off story and though I couldn't do it(others in the room) I did get painfully hard!
Keep this going!
fucking wonderful
Keep it cumming, cunt struck fucker UK
Whoa!!
This is definitely HOT!!
I look forward to the next chapter.
not bad
Hot story though not as hot as the 1st
next chapter
i hope to read soon the next chapter,maybe even one with their mom involved.thx.
great
keep it this up great storyline and look forward to Milf chapter
Hot story
Another great episode, Jasmine. Plenty of hot sex with occasional kinks!
Look forward to the MILF chapter.
Thanks for writing such horny stories.
Keep the brother's name the same
Not uncommon
Sex between siblings is far more common than most people realise. My sister, with whom I have been having regular fucks for over 20 years, claims to know over a dozen other women who have fucked with their brother. My sister has also been fucked by another brother and a cousin.
Breathtaking
Your stories seem so intense, I almost need a rest after reading them. Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter.5+++
Great
Great story can not wait for more
That was incredible! So dirty, nasty & delicious!! Well done! Looking forward to more of your stories!!!
Great but ......
Great story , i loved it , but u changed the name twice in this story & its not the same as the first part too
it kinda breaks off the continuity thinking who the hell is this ..ah he is that guy .. & stuff like this
but all in all its very good ... keep it up
witing for the science lab partener story :)
Enjoyed it
Not quite as intense/good as the first chapter but quite enjoyable none the less. Am looking forward to the Mrs. Raske conquest. Story could be continued with Allison and his mother also being brought into the fold.
First one was so much better with the teasing and such~
This one is too direct & giving orders.
I prefer the first one.
Keep (Kept) It Up
I hope there's more to follow. Nicely done
Again!
Another great story! Please keep this serious going.
More please
not found a read like this for a long time please make some more
Another great story!!!
Another great story!! Please continue this series!!
I love it!!
but where's the teacher???? We need a teacher getting involved!!!
--J
kinky and very hot
love the story.
love how the power shift. i can see the two girls having to lick della's chubby hot sexy ass. forced to do all the nasty things she can think of. making them lick her dripping wet pussy after she takes a piss all over there cute faces and bodies. making them thank her and say she is superior to them. making them take compromising pictures to keep in her personal files to keep the power shift were it belongs. forcing them to seductively give her power over there lives forever. mmmm so much going on in my kinky mind. i love the things you silkstockings have put into my kinky mind. thanks keep up the good work my sexy slut school teacher. your a true kinky hot slut that i want to dominate. the kinky hot nasty things i could do to you with my hard black cock.
Love it
Please keep it up. Thanks
Loving the series!
Thank you! Keep it up.
Hurry!
GREAT STORY. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Hot!!!
Simply put....incredibly fucking hot!!!! I can't wait to meet Mrs Raske and Allison!!!
Great story
Enjoyed both chapters. Hope you manage to keep it all in style further on and not fall for the temptation to take short cuts and head turn the story in other directions. A lot of stories here has gone bad because of that. I would advice you not to put too many people in it, as a lot of other stories drowns you in character descriptions and you can't remember half of it. The one's mentioned for further plots seem to give you enough to work with. I'm a sucker for love stories, so a happy ending for the protagonist with Allison in the end would secure this series as a success for me at least. :) As for rivals or obstacles I'm not sure that would be needed here, but if, I would say that nearly always less is more. And one thing in particular. Several stories have added other active males in later chapters to keep things interesting. I hated every single story that did that. None of the plots or characters were intact after that, and everything seemed forced and out of place.
You have good style and a nice flow to the story. Looking forward to read more.
-------
John
gr8
rly nice, hope it will continue
My my....
Your stories at first(such as the what mom does/n't know series) at first has kinda got me into stockings/pantyhose even more than previously and thrust the idea of getting into feet with them on and now with this series and the making mommy mine..... well that has all sorta gotten me into making some girl completely submit to my will :-) although i just hope i don't run into someone whos will is stronger than mine cause well..... i have a very commanding/bossy/wanting personality and well certain types of people can just make me their total slut :-P although really the only people that could make me their total slut are guys cause i sorta grow feminine being with a guy :-) i would also like to mention how when you do think of one of your parents in a certain manner and can't get that image out that your stories do not help get the parent out of my mind! lol! well this site doesn't help....
One of the best
I will be awaiting the next installment
Great work
I will be awaiting the next installment
more i want more and soon please
Wow
your work is great can't wait for more of this story
Great Story!
Wow, love your work! This, and Best Present Ever: Bitch Sister are incredibly hot! Would love it if you continued the series. Thanks for writing!
Della!!!
YES!!!!!! This is exactly what I wanted :) All I can say is - you absolutely rock :)
amazing
Reading this story makes me think of this guy as a bad as hero. The way he took control left me thinking if this guy was real he would be every guys hero
Next Chapter Please!
Please continue this excellent story - I would very much like to read the next chapter.
Need Next Chapter!
Please oh please add the next chapter! Please! It's is amazingly well written and so hot.
Outstanding
Outstanding prose! I came twice just picturing the scene.
wow
this is great hes not only banging 2 hot girls hes also raising up the sub and helping her out. good story for many reasons
Love your stuff... LOVE this story
I truly hope you continue this series. I know its hard to continue rather than start a new one, but this one has so much potential...the nerdy girl, the hot mom, whats to come of the three submissives he can already use? VERY much looking for more of this one!
Love this story
Really hoping to see it continue
Amazing
Loved this just as much as your other work. As the others stated looking forward to the next installment.
Soooooooo
Where is the MILF Neighbor.
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