All Comments on 'Eastern Delights'

by IAmThePuppetMaster

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

You kinda skipped a huge step by not telling us how the boy ended up in his hands. how did he go from the plane with his friends to this kid's house?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
my god...

shit this is sad...i dont think anyone wud treat a blue eyed white boy this way in india... Coz they are all suckers for white skin... Just sayin..

Gud story..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I want to be a slave in another country

Really loved it wish the slave was explained how he was taken overseas, like kidnapped, signed over as a slave traded or what. For me I get off on the thought of immediate control submission, love he's not really human but a dog. Wish I could read more of the story, really love it.

jonathanlovescockjonathanlovescockover 11 years ago

this is just like your other story except it has another title.? and my comments are still the same bollox. but that is just my opinon.? am sure there are plenty out there that have no taste in what they read.? have a nice day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

This story was amazing, please write a sequel (or even a midquel)!

AbdelkaoolomocroAbdelkaoolomocro5 months ago

Bit short bit loved it

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