by sammy_kind
God my dick is rock hard and I need to cum!! Man this story has me so fucking hard!!! Hurry and write the next chapter. Please.
Seriously! Do you really think your stories are that good that we are anxiously waiting month at a time for the next part? Piece of advice, post the ENTIRE story. Minutes after I read these stories I forget them and I am sure that goes for many others.
A story has a plot with a beginning, a middle, and an ending of some sort. This is so incomplete, it has none of the above. It's not even a complete sex scene.
A lot of words and two chapters, but the boy still hasn't licked any pussy or fucked her yet.
One page chapters make it hard to follow the whole story, unless they are posted daily.
What there is of the story is very good so far, but could have been posted as one good chapter, instead of dragging the story out over several weeks.
What is with you lot ? ooo it only had one chapter ooo it was not long enough ooo he didn't fuck her etc etc etc get a life !
This is a hot and well written story (you just havent finished it yet). Please carry on in the same vein.
As I said of part one,a brilliant part two to what I expect will be a classic. I am enjoying the slower pace. No need for another wham bam thank you ma'am. There are far too many hurry hurry stories on this site. Keep this up and you'll have a following of readers with a bit more class.
As I said of part one,a brilliant part two to what I expect will be a classic. I am enjoying the slower pace. No need for another wham bam thank you ma'am. There are far too many hurry hurry stories on this site. Keep this up and you'll have a following of readers with a bit more class.
I hate one page stories when it starts getting good you stop. If you think you're being funny YOU'RE NOT
1 page... 1 fucking page for all of this waiting!? I was getting into it and then what do you know!> *to be continued...* that's like writing a fucking title of the book and writing: To be continued underneath it! Fuck you man... THIS ISN'T EVEN A FINISHED SCENE!!!
I love mom/son stories the most and this is one of the best by far. Can't wait for the rest.
This is an excellent, well written story, and very arousing. I hope that you will continue. To those complaining about the length, cool it. Good erotica is difficult to write - you can't just hammer out a story in thirty minutes. To the author, take your time, but please do continue.
I read Chapter 1 without a hint that six more chapters existed. The author started developing the characters in Chapter 2. As of right now I think this series is 5 stars. I will finish my comments once I finish this story.