All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 03'

Aqua is really fighting... makes me wonder.

Love it!

Read the prologue when it first came out but hadn’t had a chance to catch up on the following chapters until today, you threw my off with the category change. I really like this story, wonder why isn’t it rated higher??!! Never mind the negative comment, I happen to like the grammar and flow, it’s almost like poetry. Keep going!

What a fun story. I absolutely love Luma's new decisions to treat his boys right.

this is waking me up.? i have to say that this is much inproved . my earlier comment may have been i little haisty.? however i reserve the right to change my comments at my leisure.? we will see....

my thoughts on this remain the same

yes they were...and the word is 'hasty'...neph i loved it make this one as long and drawn out as u see fit.

Hotlover69 is as much of an arsehole as dinkyboots. I wonder why that is . . .

I just can't stomach any more.

So disappointing.