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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/10/12

So sad :'(

This is absolutely brilliant, though I did end up messing up my make-up from crying so much. My heart goes out to her.

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by RockyStone05/03/12

OH damnnnnn

I can't add much more than the title.
RS

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by Iread2relax06/29/12

Poor Karen

JUst read about her brother/lovers death. Made me cry.

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by Anonymous12/22/12

small point but

LSD takes a couple of hours to kick in. I've never known anyone inject it. A dose lasts for 6-12 hours. I know it's not a story about drugs but it jars the reader out of the story.

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