All Comments on 'The Gentleman's Agreement Ch. 02'

by BenjiBright

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geemeedeegeemeedeeabout 12 years ago
OMG too short, too short, too short!

Carry on, ASAP!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very curious

Please do go on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Pacing...

Great writing but with some pacing issues. Don't be scared to give us two pages of detail, we can wait for the erotica. Great characters, imagery.

Nemo18Nemo18almost 10 years ago
I hope there's more

Can't wait to see what she wants

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