All Comments on 'Meet My Slut-Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Why are you commenting?

Really what's the point.

Story: Great read, thanks! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Answering the Question

"Why Are You Married?"

Um...because you have found someone special that you enjoy sharing common interests with? And for love of course, although any kind of love, including married love, is very complex, and thus difficult to put in neat little definition boxes, or neat little behavior boxes. Those who try to do that tend to live little, boxed-in lives, at least in my experience. And how sad for them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hot

This story was definitely one of the better I've read here, but your verb tenses need some serious work in quote a few different places. They're not bad enough to distract much from the story, though, and it's one of my favorite stories in spite of that little flaw.

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