homeMind ControlLouisa and LuciaPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Louisa and Lucia

bymagnesiumkuk2©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by mBrow01/10/12

Nice Story, feels incomplete

The story seems well-written grammatically, and it developed well through the session with Louisa. But there seems to be some story yet to ...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by magnesiumkuk201/10/12

More to come

Thank you, there is more story coming in a week or so.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by texhud05/20/12

Ready for more

Good story, moves quickly, good descriptions

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by texhud09/08/12

More

Good start, now continue . . . . .

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Louisa and Lucia  or
More submissions by magnesiumkuk2.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel