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Yikes
Sorry, I don't need other people for my wife and I to get off.
Dreadfully formulaic
Your mechanical presentation of the Jim/Katie/William povs is just lazy. It doesn't work. Learn to write.
I thought it was pretty good
although the 2-person narrative was a little strained as each one was telling the other what they were doing and feeling, instead of only describing what they personally were doing and feeling. Still, an interesting approach. I don't usually read the 2-party stories
hard to follow
the way you wrote it made it to hard to get into it or horny from it . no stars
Beautiful
I love it, James. Wishing I was Katie... She's a lucky lady.
Glad you're still posting on Literotica. I miss you...
xoxo
S
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