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Well told
I enjoyed the gradual buildup and eventual meeting in bed. It was a well crafted and interesting story.
I was curious if Paul and Marg were seeing each other unknown to Jim. It seems too convenient that they were both out of town at the same time, and they seem to enjoy spending time with each other.
I was also curious why this was put in the Mature category. Usually mature refers to couples with large age differences. There was nothing about Jim and Ilsa to suggest there was a large age difference between them.
what now?
Was his wife already involved with Ilse? That would explain her initial reserved attitude towards him as if he intruded on her realtionship with Marge. That could be one way to go for a next chapter where he tells Marge about his day in Ilse's bed and they invite her to stay with them after her divorce from Paul. Another could be that he continues cheating in a fucking relationsh!ip wiht Ilse and Paul and Marge are none the wiser, if it's possible to keep it a secret that is. Yet another could be where Marge joins them and they have an occasional threesome, excluding Paul. What now? You decide.
Hot!
Hot!
"Hot" says it all. Well-written and so arousing that I stayed wet long after I'd finished reading it.
Suzzie in Oregon
Thank you
I liked the story just as a story but I loved you avoiding the typical "her 49 DDDDDDD breasts stuck out straight" Dots of grey hair etc make me feel like this is actually written as a story not a mish-mash of elements from all the other stories on here. Thank you Jim
Lovely story
Well-written...builds to a lovely culmination. I enjoy your stories.
I liked it....
I would like to fuck a few of my wife's friends.....
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