Breeding Season

Love it!!!! please please please continue it!!!

love it

please keep this going

Jasper is one sick fuck but i like him anyways

Yes keep this one coming i like the flow of this storey i wannna c were this one goes
but leave the gay shit out let him fall in love with amy while she carries his pups

I'll try to keep this very brief for the sake of convenience. I think was very well-written, and I agree with the other anon that Jasper seems like a very interesting character, as sadistic as he is; he'd make a great anti-hero. Contrary to the other anon, though, I honestly like the male/male references because I think it adds to Jasper's and other werewolves' primal nature. I usually don't read stuff that involves supernatural creatures, but I'm quite happy to have stumbled upon this. Keep up the great work, Curtainsup! :)

To all you guys who get off on this kind of shit

Did some woman really mess you up so you hate all women or are you simply afraid of them?
I usually avoid this category, but I found this in the "New" section and the werewolf angle peaked my interest. My mistake, as the unrelenting mysogynistic brutality was nauseating.

Don't worry, anon. I'm just as brutal to men (in my writing). Writing about this shit doesn't mean I condone it in real life (where I only approve of sex between consenting, sane adults). There's nothing wrong with getting off on rape fantasy, when it remains a fantasy, whether you picture yourself receiving or giving. I'm extremely capable of writing about men and women being raped whilst being very for women's rights, aware of male privilege, aware of victim blaming (when it comes to real rape) and extremely conscious of misogynistic behaviour. In my fiction, I call women AND men whores, bitches, cunts and whatever else (although men get the added bonus of being called a fag). It's not really a gendered thing - in fact Breeding Season is my first foray into het fiction in years, as I prefer gay fiction far more.

Well written but too dark

The writing in this story was pretty good, above average. It seems like it has the ability to be integrated into an overarching storyline, particularly some kind of good weres vs. evil weres idea. It feels almost like a particularly sexual clip taken out of a longer novel.

However, I found it too dark for a one-shot. The mentions of her losing usefulness and being killed were way too close to snuff for comfort and made me uneasy. If it were integrated into something larger, I might be more okay with it, but at this level, it's too much and distracts from the story rather than helping it along.

I look at all of this as fantasy and found it arousing. So, well done. Everyone has a right to their kink. My kink does not have to be your kink. Are you going to publish any of your gay fiction?

Excellent

Very well written and dark. I really really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to reading the next part!

Seriously?

If you're going to go further, please consider the anatomy a bit more. There's no way for a cock to slip into a cervix during sex.

Loneflame...

there are no werewolves either, I am sorry to tell you! lol

Loneflame...that may be true for humans...

But the guy is a werewolf and not real...so...

This was very well written and I agree, this could work well in a longer story.

Please please finish I love you

I have read both this and prison bitch and I love your writing! So if you want to know if your readers want more... WE DO! I already have you bookmarked as my favorite author ;) thank you!

Great story...

...I want more. And it is possible for a penis to penetrate the cervical sphincter.

Cervix penetration like that is impossible. It ruins the suspension of disbelief. When reading about a werewolf, I'm signing on to read about a werewolf. That doesn't mean I'm automatically game for sexual impossibilities that don't spring from one character being a werewolf.

Hot!

Hot. Very hot. You're obviously a perv and I'm okay with that. I do have to tell you that some details detracted from the pleasure of the story. Keep it up though.

fantastic

i hope you write a sequel....

more please!

Great story I hope you write more. Love picturing myself as poor Amy.

... go on.

Yes please, moar please :3

Please Write More

I've read this story over and over and it is fantastic. Please write a sequel. I would love to hear about him raping Amy's ass and maybe more werewolves getting involved.

This story was perfect...you put my imagination into words. Please write more

It's great you're so enlightened. " I'm extremely capable of writing about men and women being raped whilst being very for women's rights, aware of male privilege, aware of victim blaming (when it comes to real rape) and extremely conscious of misogynistic behaviour. In my fiction..."

Burning off her clit--that's a lovely fantasy, and then there's--

"The last bitch I had? By the time I was finished with her, I could double fist her asshole. It really was remarkable. Of course, she couldn't hold her bowels anymore, so we had to give her an enema three times a day to keep her from dribbling shit, and the only way we could feel her loose cunt and ass was to have two knots in one hole, but hey, that's what replacements are for."

I'm glad to know you're such a strong advocate for women's rights.

WTF?

Anon, your ignorance is showing. Once again, I would never condone any of this in real life. And yes, I'm an extremely strong advocate for women's rights. Or any rights for minorities, as I'm extremely aware that cis, heterosexual white men are privileged. If you don't think people can be into non-con and be for women's rights, why are you looking in the non-con section?

I fully agree with curtainsup

I've read the story after one of my own readers (though not on this site) sent me the link and it's surely not a bad story, even though, you do need a twisted mind for writing something like this ... but well, seeing that I'm evil minded on ff and have - sort of - a twisted mind myself, I think this story really is worth a read ...
a story like this has nothing, absolutely nothing, to do with reality, my dear Anon, neither writing a story like this nor reading it and really, in real life I have four children, I am a teacher and work with children of every age, I try to teach them as much as possible, to protect them if necessary, sometimes even from their own parents or other family members - and anyway I write stories that make some people shudder, different than this one, but no less cruel anyway ...
it doesn't show what we are or who we are if we write such things, nor does it show who you are Anon, for reading something like this ... there should be more people allowing their minds to flow like this, on paper, and maybe then there would be less murder, rape and crime in our world
thanks, curtainsup, for writing and sharing this with your readers
evil minded

I enjoy non-con and breeding stories (within certain limits), but this one just made me feel sick. There was absolutely no respect left, neither for her as a woman, nor for the girl as a human being. This absolute lack of mercy and compassion made the read feel creepy. On the other side, I'll have to admit that this not only makes me think of you as a sick fuck (sorry), but also a good writer. After all, you were writing about an animal, so the creepy feeling is more justified than if the story had my juices running (which it didn't). May better post this under NonHuman or Horror, though.
Also: Don't know whether I should thank you sincerely for "healing" me from my werewolf fetish or thank you with a raised middlefinger for ruining it :-P

Encore!

I'm really happy I found this story, it integrates almost all of my fetishes (A rare thing), I hope you keep it coming! (pun intended)

yey

im not normaly into the whole wolf thing but the non con part of it just made it great, and yes i love the detail you go into! great read and i hope you keep writing them =) btw--im female so i rly dont get what all the "oh no womans rights" thing is about lol

More!!

That was really hot. I am also female, so to whoever first wrote the female rights thing, it's in nocon for a reason. Stfu. Please write more. I have anal fetish, and the story ended too soon. You should keep writing about how he ruins them up until the pups are born. I also have a birth fetish, so I am really excited for this.

amazing

My master showed me this story and i love it. Im his bitch so seeing the way this girl was taken and made to endure the sexual pleasures of her alpha was awesome. To the guy saying its disrespectful the bitch enjoyed it like many do when taken by their masters and used over and over. Honestly wake up it maybe a werewolf story but even so she came just like i and many masochists do. The author is not a sick fuck but a man who knows sometimes a women wants to be used and abused.

Wow....

Freaky and hot....

Loved it. I would be interesting in reading the continued the story, especially getting the other werewolves involved.
Thanks for writing!

Amazing

If you have it in you please continue. One hole done two go, the gang and cubs in the wings. Great great werewolf story

Awesome

So great to read about a girl being used like that. Loved the part about her cervix being invaded...

more please

mmmmm this made me cum *twice*! The part where he forced his way into her cervix was incredible. I'd love to read more!!!

To all of you who are complaining, consider that maybe the real misogyny lies in your assumption that all porn is written and intended by and/or for men. I'm a woman and I fucking love rough sex and fantasizing about being totally used and ruined like this. It's just a fantasy, who cares if it is realistic?! This was SO amazingly hot! I really hope you write a part two, I can't wait for the anal!

MOAR.

This fic is my absolute favorite on this site. Continue it, please, curtainsup.

so juicy

More on the way I hope...

Happily surprised

Really enjoyed reading this. I came twice and was able to finish reading afterwards, which is a huge compliment. Most of the time stories don't really peak my interest afterwards, but I had to keep reading!! The details were just enough without going over the top. I will look for you in the future when I need my kink fix! Oh and btw I am a woman who loves her nonconsent stories. This one really hit the spot.

Hate to ruin a good time with reality

There is no doubt this story is well written and the author is encouraged to continue. But the anatomical details of the sex act were so unrealistic, the story veered off into the unbelievable even with the supernatural elements.

Werewolf anatomy can cover many of the unrealistic male physiological performance and proportions. But it all falls apart with human female anatomy. The details are ridiculous and require so much suspension of disbelief that it becomes an exercise in head-banging frustration. The knot may be as big has his fist but just how big are babies? Shockingly women recover from this and manage to resume their sexual activities just fine. If worse comes to worse, what about surgery?

As for poking his dick up her cervix????!!! Is this for real? First the cervix is not positioned for penetration no matter how well endowed the uber-male. As for the dimensions of the cervical opening, it's tiny. It's designed for SPERM not a gigantic were-dick. So go ahead and write about his un-human sex act tearing her vagina in two dimensions but forget about cervical penetration. It would rip her womb apart rendering her unfit for pregnancy and kill her shortly. Unless his come had healing properties... but that would make him some kind of were-wolf/unicorn with his horn located... hmm, is this where you are going with tip of the iceberg?

How the heck does a human woman who releases one or two ripe eggs per month (at best) produce a litter of pups? Do his sperm rape her unripened eggs and keep them in a holding pattern like a plane waiting to land? You better be careful with this one since ovaries contain thousands of eggs.

Finally, there are multiple references to getting rid of the women once the werewolves cannot enjoy them any more. It could be interpreted as a snuff story which is completely unsuitable for a soft porn site. Please clarify Amy's unpleasant but existent fate worse than death. Hand her over to the were-doctors who would heal her, restore her virgin body, wipe her sexual memories, play mind games, and rape her over and over again. There you go.

Hate to ruin reality with fiction...

Good story keep writing, I'd love to see what else you come up with!... (:

To the commenter below me:

First off, werewolves are considered a fictional creature of myth and legend, on top of that this whole story is a fictional work of writing, meaning a world created by the author's mind, which can be as displaced from reality or as set in reality has the author damn well chooses... The average "fictional story" is prone to bouts of creativity and/or imagination, at seemingly random times, during what ever action/event/time and/or thought the author can change something. That is what makes it fiction, not non-fiction... Plus it's not only a fictional story, there fictional characters, which means the author can make them do what ever and/or change them anyway that he/she wants... Hell even if they were based on real live people he/she could do what ever they want to the character INSIDE THE "FICTIONAL" STORY... So, in other words... If the writer says rainbows, cheese burgers, and mind raping unicorns fly out his ass... Then guess what?... Rainbows, cheese burgers, and mind raping unicorns just flew out his ass!!!!.... If the writer says she grew butterfly wings, the head of a mosquito and sucked the guy dry of blood through his fucking big toe!... Then that's what happened... So you can take your foot, insert it in your trolling mouth and take it somewhere else, because I actually admire some one who can actually create something the way they want and are not weighed down by what other people say is possible or not...

more!!!

I really enjoyed how hot this story is. I've read your other work due to how good it was and would love for you to continue this piece!

very hot story .....

.makes me wish a werewolf lived next door

More Please

Please continue this story - it's amazing!

more!!!!!

Please more!!!!!!!!

more

Moore moore more

WOW

I CAN NOT BELIEVE HOW MUCH THIS STOREY AFFECTED ME..PLEASE GIVE ME MORE, MORE, AND OH YA MORE...

OMFG THIS MADE ME CUM SO HARD..................WRITE ABOUT HER ANAL INSEMINATION TOO

Hot

This story was a good mix of forced recreation and procreation. Nicely done!

this story

i love it it's the best

please continue. I come back regularly to see if there is more because its so damn good!!