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Blowjobs On Demand

bySusanJillParker©
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by cookie40401/14/12

Very different....and enjoyable.

Your creativity abounds. The action was hot, and the sister twist was unique.

Keep up the good work.

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by The Style Guy01/16/12

If you like blow jobs...

...you'll love this story. Great job. Great sex.

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by RichardHardy01/31/12

Nice twist

I liked the way you developed this story. Of course, it was the title that got me at first but your writing held me. Keep coming back to Lit.

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by Ntexeagle02/01/12

Thanks

You have done it again, written the perfect story. Twins, oral, strangers....perfect.

I am looking forward to your cumming releases. I do have a question for you, "Susan, are you going shopping?"

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by akwildman04/08/12

Great Story!!

OMG! I Loved this one! Well written & oh so hot!!! Thanks for sharing with us! Wish I could be on the receiving end of one from you myself !!

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by mortis07/03/12

what a great story

my credit card would be maxed out but damn I'd be happy

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by Str8tJacket07/17/12

So many interesting dynamics at work here, along of course with primal instincts.

You weave a story that draws one into it, searching for the next clue to what is really happening. Of course the equally attractive twin and so many other things leading him to believe he controls her. Yet in the end she is the one in control. Having her cake and eating it too.

I must admit the eyes had me going.

Very interesting and I enjoyed reading it.

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by red_101au07/25/12

absolutely excellent.... had me hanging on the entire time just waiting to see if she really was under his control .... I admit I had my suspicions but it didnt disappoint, and the twin sister was a very nice touch .... :)

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by CanadianM08/04/12

Wonderful

Well done. A great story that kept my interest throughout. Loved the twist where it was revealed that she was not under his spell, but doing it because she wanted to. Great job.

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by PaBob08/09/12

With a Twist of Lime?

Wishful thinking for guys and funny. Loved the story premise.

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by Lee201212/14/12

Loved it

Gives a whole new meaning to the "What's in your wallet".

Lee

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by Jim4444412/22/12

Sexy fun

A light story. Just what I needed, erotic with a twist of humor.

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by gperry284312/31/12

Again

You wrote a story that I really enjoyed, that I wasn't going to read because I thought the subject matter was offensive.

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by lonewolfhunting03/18/13

Never going to fool a real woman!

I LOVED the twist at the end - wish my wife loved cocksucking as much as she does (and I assume that you do since you write with such authority!).

I'd gladly give you (or your sister) my credit card for a good blowjob! LOL

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by gimmie_your_load08/24/13

Fun!

A very fun story and with a great twist :) Loved it!

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by cosmosenfold11/13/13

I love it.

Yes women are smarter than we men are.

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by jott5011/09/14

5*

...if for no other reason than this was such a funny take on who is really in charge in this marriage...lol

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by zena9911/10/14

Nice

She's still a slut, but knowingly.

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