All Comments on 'Astrid's Rise Ch. 01'

This story would of been great. Then it took an arrow to the knee.

What, exactly, were you looking for that disappointed you and why are you hiding?

This story was well crafted.

Relax, puzzlepiece. :) Anonymous is quoting a meme. It's actually a compliment about how well I managed to remind him (or her) of the game in question. Thank you both for your kind (if Quixotic) words. I look forward to writing more Astrid.

it was well written but sithis is patron of the brotherhood and it seemed as if she killed the husband she met in the brotherhood

You said you would write more but never did and I was looking forward to more.