This is another wimp hubby and whore wife. Put this in Fetish where it belongs. You are sick Hope you have a good lawyer. Maybe an STD will wake you both uo
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Anonymous01/11/12
* Didn't read the story, no point.
The writer is a cuckolded swinger so what do people expect him to write about? Swinging cuckolds are all the same and think the same as do their swinging cuckolding wives.
When moderating my comments, I delete any offensive remarks. Supporting or not, makes no difference to me. @the person who gets sick at the sight of my name: Perhaps you should not open my stories if they elicit such a reaction. There are plenty of other authors to read. @those who wish disease and divorce upon me for being a sicko: Luckily in "storyland," disease and pricey divorces don't exist unless the writer wishes them to. I do truly hope anyone who ACTUALLY has sex with multiple partners would take the utmost care to prevent the spread of stds and unwanted pregnancy by using condoms/birth control and disease screening. @the person who did not read my story but wasted your time commenting on it: I feel special that I was important enough for you to take time out of your day to explain what you think you know about me when you don't know anything about me or anyone else who writes these kind of fantasy stories. @those who like my writing even if you don't like all of the subject matter: Thank you and feel free to send me a private feedback with any requests you might have.
Frankly why have rules when one partner can ignore them? While the story doesn't give details about rules for outside sex turning off the skype because having sex is different then a bj is cheating in more ways then one and is a tell tale that she is goung to truly cuckold him and humiliate him,this is what they call a philadelphia lawyer trick. He would be right to be pissed at this....it could be all that happened was the guy left and she was teasing him but she broke the spirit of the rules which is supposed to be both people enjoying it.If the guy lets her do what she wants he is a wimp to be honest.
@ njlauren - You are correct. The rules about sex outside of marriage were not clearly defined, as he was not expecting that ending. I think you overanalyzed the story a bit, but I will certainly be sure to address what you had to say in the next chapter. Thank you.
@Those asking about the next chapter. I will try to finish it in a few weeks time. If you have any ideas or things you want to see in the next round, feel free to send me a private msg via the feedback tool and let me know.
Just love comments from tazzz317. I just wish to know what all the abbriviations stands for. It seams we read same stories. As far as this story goes a solid 3*
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Anonymous01/12/12
Excellent
Can't understand some of the negative and abusive comments. It's only a story. . .
I realyy enjoyed it and look forward to more. Please carry on with the next instalment.
And I agree completely with your decision to delete offensive comments. I would like to read a story and be able to discuss its merits or shortcoming with the author and other reasonable critics, not with the sick misogynists who make a life out of compulsively reading erotic material of this variety, masturbating, then sublimating their guilt by defecating all over the comments section.
Pretty well written, seemed to bring us into the situation. Seems as if they can handle the whole open marriage thing, most can't! Consequences could go either way-a marriage strengthened or destroyed.
It was a really good story. I don't know why people are saying its a cuckold story. It is part of a game that they invented. He gave her the instructions. She isn't cuckolding him. People get so sensitive and moral on this site. If a wife has sex with someone other than her husband and he doesn't blow up, people automatically leave wimpy cuckolding comments. While I wouldn't play a game like that with my wife, I can't say what would and wouldn't work in someone else's marriage. My wife has a married friend who used to swing with her husband. They enjoyed it but stopped when she came down with cancer. They have been married for 15 years. With the divorce rate at 50% in this country, if two people do something outside of the box and it doesn't ruin their marriage, I say go for it. Back to the story, I liked it. Nice start.
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Anonymous06/21/14
To the previous commentator. Because it IS a cuckold story.
That's what he is, no question. The only question is how long it will take him to get to the attorney's office to file the divorce papers. This is simply another dumb story about a cheating slut that thinks it's okay to cheat on her husband for her own selfish reasons. Dumb, dumb, dumb.
English
rubbish
crap, however much you package it, still stinks horribly.
INVITING THE WEASEL INTO THE HEN
what else could be the outcome. TK U MLJ LV NV
see your name
Isee your name and i puke.
just hope he has money for a good lawyer
because when she continues fucking the lover, he talk her in to leaving your dumb ass broke for him.
you're deleting all comments, even supporting ones?
so 1*
Wow!
What an amazing start! I'll bet he tells her to explicitly leave the connection going from now on. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Are you for Real?
This is another wimp hubby and whore wife. Put this in Fetish where it belongs. You are sick Hope you have a good lawyer. Maybe an STD will wake you both uo
* Didn't read the story, no point.
The writer is a cuckolded swinger so what do people expect him to write about? Swinging cuckolds are all the same and think the same as do their swinging cuckolding wives.
Comments
When moderating my comments, I delete any offensive remarks. Supporting or not, makes no difference to me. @the person who gets sick at the sight of my name: Perhaps you should not open my stories if they elicit such a reaction. There are plenty of other authors to read. @those who wish disease and divorce upon me for being a sicko: Luckily in "storyland," disease and pricey divorces don't exist unless the writer wishes them to. I do truly hope anyone who ACTUALLY has sex with multiple partners would take the utmost care to prevent the spread of stds and unwanted pregnancy by using condoms/birth control and disease screening. @the person who did not read my story but wasted your time commenting on it: I feel special that I was important enough for you to take time out of your day to explain what you think you know about me when you don't know anything about me or anyone else who writes these kind of fantasy stories. @those who like my writing even if you don't like all of the subject matter: Thank you and feel free to send me a private feedback with any requests you might have.
Liked It
Hope you ignore the bad press and continue.
kind of weird
Frankly why have rules when one partner can ignore them? While the story doesn't give details about rules for outside sex turning off the skype because having sex is different then a bj is cheating in more ways then one and is a tell tale that she is goung to truly cuckold him and humiliate him,this is what they call a philadelphia lawyer trick. He would be right to be pissed at this....it could be all that happened was the guy left and she was teasing him but she broke the spirit of the rules which is supposed to be both people enjoying it.If the guy lets her do what she wants he is a wimp to be honest.
Great first chapter
A little on the short side, but can't wait for part 2!
story 2 will be when?
Regards to Round 2
@ njlauren - You are correct. The rules about sex outside of marriage were not clearly defined, as he was not expecting that ending. I think you overanalyzed the story a bit, but I will certainly be sure to address what you had to say in the next chapter. Thank you.
@Those asking about the next chapter. I will try to finish it in a few weeks time. If you have any ideas or things you want to see in the next round, feel free to send me a private msg via the feedback tool and let me know.
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Just love comments from tazzz317. I just wish to know what all the abbriviations stands for. It seams we read same stories. As far as this story goes a solid 3*
Excellent
Can't understand some of the negative and abusive comments. It's only a story. . .
I realyy enjoyed it and look forward to more. Please carry on with the next instalment.
Good story, looking forward to more.
And I agree completely with your decision to delete offensive comments. I would like to read a story and be able to discuss its merits or shortcoming with the author and other reasonable critics, not with the sick misogynists who make a life out of compulsively reading erotic material of this variety, masturbating, then sublimating their guilt by defecating all over the comments section.
HOT
If what you want is a sundae, don't ask for a single-dip cone, even if you think the most you might get is an M&M.
OK
Pretty well written, seemed to bring us into the situation. Seems as if they can handle the whole open marriage thing, most can't! Consequences could go either way-a marriage strengthened or destroyed.
Well done!
See Subject line... :)
great story
your off to a great start here,keep it up,can't wait for more
Loved it
Good story with a great ending. I would love to know what happens in Round two.
I liked it
It was a really good story. I don't know why people are saying its a cuckold story. It is part of a game that they invented. He gave her the instructions. She isn't cuckolding him. People get so sensitive and moral on this site. If a wife has sex with someone other than her husband and he doesn't blow up, people automatically leave wimpy cuckolding comments. While I wouldn't play a game like that with my wife, I can't say what would and wouldn't work in someone else's marriage. My wife has a married friend who used to swing with her husband. They enjoyed it but stopped when she came down with cancer. They have been married for 15 years. With the divorce rate at 50% in this country, if two people do something outside of the box and it doesn't ruin their marriage, I say go for it. Back to the story, I liked it. Nice start.
To the previous commentator. Because it IS a cuckold story.
That's what he is, no question. The only question is how long it will take him to get to the attorney's office to file the divorce papers. This is simply another dumb story about a cheating slut that thinks it's okay to cheat on her husband for her own selfish reasons. Dumb, dumb, dumb.
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