The next time you want to complain about the wait, take it up with the website who took two weeks to post an update that was already edited and waiting patiently to be submitted. Thanks a lot.
First and foremost. Thank you for sharing. Second, update when it is convenient for you. I'll wait and I won't complain! Seriously though. I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue!!!! I can't wait for the next installment.
I am loving this story although I so wished it was longer but then again I'm greedy as hell. roflmao The feedback is funny because on here you have to learn patience. There was this one story I waited a little over a year for the writer to post another chapter. The story was so Sci-Fi wonderful hell I just didn't care anylonger just as long as I got another taste. So for all of those not used to the way things are done. Just take your time and Chill cause a great story is well worth the wait. Thanks Cassandraharper
Nothing like a bit of passion to ignite a memory.... touch is such a powerful, powerful sense and Caid/Adriano is employing it very skillfully. He is lucky to have found her in a loveless marriage. It will make what they both need to do so much easier.
I really do hate pompous asses like Paul....for him life is the two dimensional world of a mirror; cold, flat and shallow.
Please do continue, by all means with this tale.
Yes its fantasy, but a story needs to have internal consistency. I can suspend belief for the switching bodies and the complete recovery, However, she supposedly prays at his bedside in one chapter only to not recognize him or his name in the next. Then he, previously portrayed as considerate and caring, sexually assaults her and she accepts this. What nonsense.
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Anonymous07/18/13
Incoherences...
So Caid bacame Adriano just like that? And Wasn't Brigitte supposed to have been at his bedside during his coma? Now she doesn't know who he is?
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how long is the wait this time?
I missed this story. thanks for the update.
Dear Anonymous,
The next time you want to complain about the wait, take it up with the website who took two weeks to post an update that was already edited and waiting patiently to be submitted. Thanks a lot.
Sarcastically,
Cassandra
Ok. Now I'm hooked!
First and foremost. Thank you for sharing. Second, update when it is convenient for you. I'll wait and I won't complain! Seriously though. I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue!!!! I can't wait for the next installment.
This convo is funny as hell
I am loving this story although I so wished it was longer but then again I'm greedy as hell. roflmao The feedback is funny because on here you have to learn patience. There was this one story I waited a little over a year for the writer to post another chapter. The story was so Sci-Fi wonderful hell I just didn't care anylonger just as long as I got another taste. So for all of those not used to the way things are done. Just take your time and Chill cause a great story is well worth the wait. Thanks Cassandraharper
Sugah..sugah....SUGAH!!!!!
Nothing like a bit of passion to ignite a memory.... touch is such a powerful, powerful sense and Caid/Adriano is employing it very skillfully. He is lucky to have found her in a loveless marriage. It will make what they both need to do so much easier.
I really do hate pompous asses like Paul....for him life is the two dimensional world of a mirror; cold, flat and shallow.
Please do continue, by all means with this tale.
Memories
help us to survive, I do not like the cheating part, good that she is able to feel again.
um
What the hell kind of ending is that? you started off strong wth?
makes no sense
Yes its fantasy, but a story needs to have internal consistency. I can suspend belief for the switching bodies and the complete recovery, However, she supposedly prays at his bedside in one chapter only to not recognize him or his name in the next. Then he, previously portrayed as considerate and caring, sexually assaults her and she accepts this. What nonsense.
Incoherences...
So Caid bacame Adriano just like that? And Wasn't Brigitte supposed to have been at his bedside during his coma? Now she doesn't know who he is?
I wonder what would happen if he told her who he really is. In a weird way he is living a double life
lol
Love that last part!
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