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Waiting All Along Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Decadentdessert01/19/12

Tying up some the lose ends, great!. All I want to know who was Nick; gay friend , partner or lover? What happen to Josh childhood friend. Looking forward to reading more thank you for updating.

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by hisangelbeauty01/20/12

uh

confused me some but still a great update.

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by Nightpleasure01/20/12

Interesting

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by emj41702/10/12

interesting and a bit confusing--will there be more? If yes, can you bring in a past crazy gf of Pauls', bc we know he wasn't celibate for 10 yrs?

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by Madameblaque03/04/12

So....

Is this the end or does she get to tell Paul what his Dad told her when she almost died??? Good story, but a lot of gaps.

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by chocolatesista02/14/14

Damn

You seriously had me crying but I am so happy both Grace and her baby girl are alive. Thank you Adam Tate. Is there more to come?

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