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Can't You Knock First? Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/18/12

way way way

To short . Good but to short.

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by playhard01/19/12

Get mom involved

Great stories so far. Good read but now its time for mom to be part of the story

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by digdaddyrich01/19/12

Not much forward progress from chapter 1

The girl surely doesn't embarrass very easily, that's for sure, and if mom's pussy is getting that tingleing feeling in it, she may have to have some hard cock to help herself out.

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by jpprice201101/19/12

AGREE

It was way to short,and where dose MOM fit in

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by rock675201/21/12

And then what happened

Did mom get her satisfction on her own, with her husband or her son or her daughter or maybe all three of them together. There are so many possible combonations that you should write about.

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by topace10/24/12

I agree it's too short!

Way too short, didn't move the plot forward enough IMHO.

This could have easily have been combined with the previous or next chapter.

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by Anonymous01/26/13

So...

..is there a part 3?

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by Anonymous04/17/13

I agree, get mom involved

Jeff's already creamed his sister's cute little twat. Now it's time for him to step up, stick his young prick up his mother's mature cunt and blow his young balls up where he was once a baby. The boy's creamy semen belongs in both of the family twats.

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by Anonymous07/01/13

You need to post a third chapter the first two were so hot

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by Anonymous09/25/13

Yep #3 Needs to coming soon!!

I like the shortness, the clarity of a teenager's view of "let's screw" porn and you seem to have a nice grasp. Don't lose it and bring it on, please!!

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