A Strict Governess for Richard

Sorry to interupt...

But, did anyone eVER finished reading this British work of "art"? In the begining was a bit of fun, then it started to feel more like Dostevsky's "Crime and Punisment". I felt that i have commited a crime and was being punished all at once......I do not have any more patience with any more sphinkter stretching....I,v had enough...please be my guest and read more, I have given up on pg.9. One have to take a vacation to finish this story. DMITRY NO LIKE. 3*

Classic

Having read the full story at another venue, I judge it to be a classic in the Victorian genre, as good as or better than any writing found in the Pearl and other erotica produced by the Victorian era. Jane Marwood is an amazing author. Predilection for one act or another may be a matter of personal preference, but no one can deny her brilliant writing, her sparkling wit, and her fascinating imagination.

Well Written, but...

I was drawn in, and enjoyed through the lake punishment, until the hospital, when it was clear that hand jobs with prostate massages were the only sexual act which existed in this county... then I had to stop out of repetition. Nice writing though, truly.

It sucks

This entry sucks (like the irony?) It's not worthy of more comment . . .

Well written, but...

... it's incredibly repetitive and ultimately becomes boring. Also, you occasionally mix up the names of the characters. One other thing; Richard is described as circumcised, yet all the women in the story are constantly manipulating or cleaning or pulling his foreskin.

Ok, but long and repetitive

Don't know if you are a male or female but I am guessing female. Why? Because the "cough" routine is to check for hernias and the doc does not do this by holding the testicles but inserting a finger up into the lower abdomen on each side to see if there is a hernia there. Not ever sure how this would be done on a female or if it could be done.

Your writing is good, but as said it was way to repetitive. I also got tired of hearing how embarrassed the boy was he would surely get used to this treatment or at least the nudity. However, one thing did bother me. I realized he was only a toy, but one doesn't train toys and the story although very long did a poor job of explaining the thoughts of the women and certainly not the boy. This left the story "empty" with regard to anything but the immediate feelings the women had and the embarrassment of the boy.

You had plenty of time for "character" development and to avoid the idea that the boy was simply a idiot and not capable of rational though, although supposedly a "good student."

Hopefully, future stories will be more expansive but more concise.

I loved it and voted it one of the best!

I don't suppose its appeal is universal. But I loved the story. I certainly don't agree with the derogatory comments. Why savage a work when it so well written and entertaining. It really appealed to me. Why can't we have more stories of this standard and length?

mikest3@hotmail.co.uk

Wonderful, but left wanting more

Wonderfully written as ever, and taken in sections one of the most arousing stories on fetlife.
My one constructive criticism, is that the sexual activity could have progressed to another level, forced oral worship, or strap-on sex for example.
Can't fault the writing itself though, both superb and inspiring.

Holy Mother of God!

You do medical fetish better than anyone I have ever read! Absolutely engrossing and stimulating. Please, never ever stop writing from the FemDom perspective. Truly amazing. My favorite by far.

Exciting

I wished that I was Richard! I would not be embarrased to have that many women look at my penis!!! I would like to have that done to me daily, and more than once.

nice

Like the last man alive

Richard gets all the attention, the humiliation, the molestation! The dialog is so nice and polite and formal. The anticipation builds as one super-shy young man suffers under the control of about a dozen kinky females who love to make him blush. Fun plot, skilled writing, and more forced nudity than a Penn State locker-room! More embarrassing procedures than a TSA checkpoint! What’s not to like: a five star novel! One of the best, can’t wait for the movie!

Masterpiece!

You should submit this for publishing. So much better than "50 Shades of Gray" and much more entertaining!

Absolutely Awesome

Please Miss! Can we have some more!
I lost count on how many times I came, to imagine myself as being Richard, the lucky man! Thank you with love from Robin xxx

loong story

super long story gud work but try to cut it short

Hi Jane!

Love your work. I’ve written a story similar in genre to John Glassco’s “The English Governess”. I am convinced that you will enjoy it very much. For different reasons, I can’t post it here on Literotica, but contact me by email and I’ll send you the story.

Harrietmarwood@yahoo.dk

i think the boy is more like 12/13 ..

12/13 going on 14 yrs old /...but I guess you must say /use 18 as to not use a child in this .....

Pages and pages of garbage.

I can't believe you posted it. I can't believe anyone bothered to read it. Could it have been more poorly written with more wooden characters? Just god awful.

C.C

Jane Marwood, you are good!

Ugh!

Formulaic, woodenly predictable, and ultimately, crashingly boring....A world record for the number of times the word "sphincter" was used in a story....Pure silliness.

I loved it. Thanks very much

Wish that it had been Wendy as the lead character instead of Richard.