All Comments on 'Back to Life Ch. 01'

by lewrose

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geemeedeegeemeedeeover 12 years ago
Um, yes, please.

Carry on, with a quickness! This is hot, and I like your storytelling voice.

seeker71seeker71over 12 years ago
Outstanding

Outstanding first chapter, I can't wait for your next post. Your narrative style is refreshing and your wit evident. He really is in a bad way falling for his uncle!

Peace and joy,

Shell

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent first submission

I'm glad this is a multi-parter. Already liking the story very much.

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