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A Recipe for Submission

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by Anonymous01/15/12

I know this is a nit pick

But PLEASE make your paragraphs 1/4 the size you currently have here. I have difficulty with my eyes skipping so I couldn't get past the first paragraph. I believe small paragraph size is strongly suggested too all authors who submit on this site. You could edit this and resubmit... I'd love to read it.

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