All Comments on 'Could It Be? Ch. 02'

by zia27

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grunabonagrunabonaabout 12 years ago
*****

Still charming.

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Thank you!

Im so glad you continued. These two have undeniable chemistry and im excited to see where this goes. Please dont let it be another two years before you update.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 12 years ago
Good writing.

You've dealt with the main weaknesses in part one. Looking forward to more.

zia27zia27about 12 years agoAuthor
thank you

Thank you all for your compliments - they are motivation.

mrskelleymrskelleyabout 12 years ago
Loving it!

Wonder what he will do? Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
nooooooo, keep going

charming story, KEEP GOING!!!! Oh, and please please PLEASE make the next part a bit longer

avrgblkgrlavrgblkgrlabout 12 years ago
Oh I'm loving this...

I was happy to see the update. I hated to see it end. Next time longer! We are greedy for more:)

~AvrgBlkGrl

MadameblaqueMadameblaqueabout 12 years ago

Great story!! Love the S.A. references-please continue.!!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmabout 12 years ago
Oh KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

Now you've gone and done it!!!!! Let's roll up the sleeves and get down.

Here is a man with decisions to make. They are very attracted to each other and it is

palpable, but we know it will be for him to make a SIGNIFICANT move. His age makes him hungry for something fresh. He's seen much in his years. Not always a good thing for men.

She is younger, but clearly the more realistic one of the pair. Sistahs always have to be a step ahead in the game...all about survival.

Please don't make us wait tooooooooooo long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Love It!

But please don't let us wait soooooooooooooo long for your updates.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wow!

Ur story is wonderful!! And it higlights exactly what goes on in sa... White men dnt really look at us black women but we have things to offer too!! Ur story is amazing! Can't wait to read ur next part!!

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