All Comments on 'The First Time'

Fun, hot, well-written, with a odd twist and surprising conclusion. Thanks again, story master!

Anyone else get the feeling she wasn't TOO upset about letting him live ?

I always love seeing another story from manyeyedhydra. Thank you. :-)

awesome story,really,but i was hopping she would finish him off

Happy new year to you too :)

thanks to M.E.Hydra for not abondoning us. Thank you for such a great little story. How is Phyll????? I wish he would come out and play, or maybe he is not allowed to?????

That has to be the first time I've read about someone leaving a note. Awesome twist!

erotic element missing

Good stories, but they do make you/us wish for more after the end.

I didn't care for the story,there was no depth no plot only him getting laid.