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Miz Sara Goes on Maneuvers

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31701/16/12

WHEN MIZ SARA STEPS TO THE PLATE

the relief pitcher better start warming up. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous01/16/12

Awesome as usual!

I love these little tales of Miz Sara's adventures.

Maybe it would be nice to tell a little story of her youth??

Tazz317 - Fuck me dead mate, just shut the fuck up!!!!!!!

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by MarvinS01/16/12

Miz Sara

Miz Sara is one of my favorite characters. I hope to read more.

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by LordSlamdawgg01/16/12

Another Dixie Fried, Tame Little Tale for the Geritol Crowd !

Dont get me wrong this stuff is harmless if read or written at it's current rate of every few monts . I confess to enjoying the military metaphors. There's actually potential in these characters.. The author prefers to keep his plot transparent & get by on aforementioned surface charm. Four Stars ****

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by Anonymous01/16/12

♥ Miz Sara ♥

Miz Sara stories are a breath of fresh air. Thanks!

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by bruce2201/16/12

Miz Sara is fun!

The stories are interesting enough even though they are not great lit. It is nice to read something that is enjoyable. This one could have hurt someone who was cheated on....

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by cpete01/16/12

Another winner

Well done and enjoyable tale. Always look forward to your byline and great stories

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by Rob Conner01/16/12

I Just Loves Miz Sarah!

Good Tale. More, More!!!

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by daveftworth01/16/12

Great series

I so enjoy the Miz Sara stories. Great Job!

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by jiminab01/16/12

I just love this series

Super enjoyable gentle reads. Thank you for them all author and for the ones that we have yet to see. Jim

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by DanielQSteele101/16/12

If Agatha Christie posted on LIT

I think the result would be something like the Miz Sara stories. Short, sweet, well written and well plotted, the stories take an English Drawing Room approach to infidelity and adultery and cheating and lying. All very civilized,which is actually more realistic than a lot of the stories that run here. And yet, there is a sting in their tail because we're still dealing with hearts being broken. A very good series. AND if anyone is interested in another series that ran here, another volume in WWWM - "Second Acts" - including a good amount of new material - is now available from Barnes and Noble.

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by db104401/16/12

Looking Forward

Miz Sara is a wonderful character. You REALLY need to develop a full length novel (or better yet, a series).

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by Saxon_Hart01/16/12

great job

I have to hand it to you for writing a wonderful BTB tale from a new viewpoint. Now I'm gonna have to read more of your catalog. Once again thank you for a good story.

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by OldHideki01/16/12

I am really enjoying the Miz Sara series

Please, please... Keep adding more stories. Thank You.

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by Anonymous01/17/12

Great Read

Please keep them coming. Truly a joy to read

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by Anonymous01/17/12

Wonderful story.

Well developed characters without overwriting them. And Miz Sara is one of my favorites. Pleasse: more stories.

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by Dawnzo01/17/12

5 STARS!!

Love Miz Sara and Marcy:)

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by rjordan01/17/12

Outstanding

Great story telling and Miz Sara is such a terrific character I wish I knew her.

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by Vulcez01/17/12

I always look forward to a new story by FrancisMacomber

Great story. Another winner!

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by Anonymous01/17/12

More! More!

I love your Miz Sara stories. There are always believable problems AND solutions and the ending is usuallu upbeat.
Keep writing about Miz Sara and I'm sure many people will continue reading your stories.

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by oldwayne01/17/12

Sic Semper Cozeners.

May cheaters always have the same fate. Thank you for the story.

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by chytown01/17/12

Wonderful Story!!!

Thanks for a very entertaining story.

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by Anonymous01/18/12

You just keep churning out winners!

Thanks for another enjoyable experience.

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by PaulHayabusa01/19/12

Great one Francis!

DanielQSteele1,
edit your profile and put all information about WWWM series there.U can do your adversiment without worries there.

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by demantoid01/20/12

Wonderfully clever and wonderfully well written.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story Francis...thank you.

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by Huedogg201/20/12

another great story

but then I wouldn't expect any less from you.

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by Anonymous01/20/12

i dunno y this story in literotica?

this story sucks

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by Anonymous02/25/12

Great series

5 star effort, thanks for submitting

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by Tavadelphin06/22/12

Admittedly less erotic than a lot on this site -

But it still a Loving Wives story after all -

And the series is fun

And some of us like fun

And the author does it well -

Soooo --IMHO keep it up -

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by Drbeamer333305/10/13

Loved it

Sweet revenge for the cheating wife. Another great installment.

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by wanoldman09/21/13

Wonderful series

I just found your name--the FAVORITE-- of another author. I have enjoyed reading your stories from the top down until I found Miz Sarah. Any more in the offing??
PLEEEEZE ??

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by Tim41341310/06/14

These Miz Sara stories are very nice.

I could see them in a TV series, but I imagine the audience might get tired of two LW stories every week. I see Miz Sara has returned to serving sweet tea. Will fruit tea make a return?

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by sbrooks10312/31/15

Crocodile Tears

“tears streaming from her eyes.” – Once again, the cheating wife crying over the loss of the husband she despised!

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by Drbeamer333306/07/16

Second time through....

A fun one. Still five stars.

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