by LadySanguine
Make it longer these short pages r such a tease... I'm intiruged as to what Balior is. Great writing but please give us more. Thanks for share :-)
The story is great i want to read more..... :)
Ohh, this is getting so interesting. I cant wait for the next upload.
This has a lot of potential looking forward to the next chapter but longer chapters would be appreciated. Keep up the great work!
Hurrry please really good so far
But rather suddenly ended, with no closure, please finish the story, i quite thoroughly enjoyed it.
This is such an interesting story, it definitely deserves to be completed, won't you please continue to write it and bring it to a satisfying finish?
Why would you start this wonderful story and just never finish it? One of the best premises for a great piece of supernatural fiction I've seen on this site and then it just ends?!