All Comments on 'Unexpected Holiday'

I enjoyed the story very much. I can see several ways to becoming a real hot story. Keep going and do well. I like it!

Interesting story line, However it still seems like rape and not seduction or love making, it would be interesting to read how it comes out.

I concur with the previous anonymous's comments. And the intro mentioning a lack of 'non-consent' was a welcome break from what seems to be an increasing theme.

More background on the elf would have been welcome. And just what size was this diminutive elf? (After all she managed to reach the tea packet.)

Looking forward to a chapter 2.